"Almighty Monarch.....Your power is too much for this world or this universe to hold you anymore.....we humbly request you to go to another universe"
"..."
"Don't worry... In that universe there is a planet very similar to earth..... except for the fact there are other races called themselves demons, gods, yokai, angels, fallen angels... I am sure you will not get bored"
"..."
"You don't have to worry about this planet......we rulers ensure you that in your absence this planet will be protected by us"
After using a cup of reincarnation and then killing all monarchs for the second time.....sung jin woo who has returned to his teenage form now .......has to make a difficult decision.
He has to go to another universe otherwise the home tries to protect with all his might will perish because of his power.
Even though he has no choice but to decide to leave his home to protect his loved ones
After 700 years...
On some isolated planet...
"System what is this task .....you spoke of?"
An extremely beautiful silver-haired woman wearing maid attire said this while looking at thin air
[ Task: Conquer the heart of shadow monarch ]
[ Time limit: N/A ]
[ Failure Penalty: Extinction of Demon race ]
The woman's silver eyes were wide open in shock as she muttered unconsciously "grayfia.....What kind of mess....you got into?"
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Hello, this is your friendly neighbourhood shinigami with his second fanfic... I just want to tell you this fanfic is based on one possibility I always imagined.....if jin woo had agreed to the ruler's suggestion at that time after killing all the monarchs.
The main heroine- Grayfia Lucifuge and ......more will be coming in future
This is maybe a multiverse story...... depending on the audience.
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To make it short: don't waste your time trying to read this.
Story:
This is a story about a what if scenario of Jin-Woo choosing to depart earth at the end of Solo-Leveling and spending eternity on a wasteland planet in the DxD dimension, well not really, because the MC appears to be Grayfia Lucifuge, who is chosen by a "System" to woo Jin (sorry for the bad pun).
Until Chapter 30, where I dropped it, it was all about Grayfia, and we only get some glimpses in Jin's thought processes, which feel off, not like I would have him think he would act.
The Good:
It made me check out Solo-Leveling again and find that there was an after story that I hadn't read before.
The Bad:
The English it is written in is barely a step up from machine translations. Wrong words, wrong times, no proper punctuation, run-on sentences with lots of... that make it hard to read and feel like everyone and everything is stuttering non-stop. Reading this is making me dizzy.
The System helping Grayfia too feels stupid, since it starts helping her level up, like The Gamer, with instant dungeons. I just don't get why it is going down that route.
Spare yourself the headache and pass on this one.
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I am not going to rate, since I couldn’t read the whole thing. I can still share my two cents tho. The story itself may be alright, you may like it - feel free to give it a try. However, I can’t tell you what’s going on, since I couldn’t bear reading it. My brain just wasn’t braining, since author doesn’t use neither commas or actual sentences. You will rarely see a full stop anywhere. Instead, you will see a lot of “... ”, by that I mean, even between words, not only sentences (for example “How... are... you doing? I am doing fine... thank you). So, I am stopping at chapter 15, feel free to read through, maybe this will change.
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