By Adamos_Amet
Austin was a kid that loved to watch Anime, especially Pokemon. Annoyed at how the series was going after Sinnoh, he fell asleep before waking up, somehow as Ash the morning he began his journey. In shock at what happened he tries to find a way to
To make it short: don't waste your time trying to read this.
Story:
This is a story about a what if scenario of Jin-Woo choosing to depart earth at the end of Solo-Leveling and spending eternity on a wasteland planet in the DxD dimension, well not really, because the MC appears to be Grayfia Lucifuge, who is chosen by a "System" to woo Jin (sorry for the bad pun).
Until Chapter 30, where I dropped it, it was all about Grayfia, and we only get some glimpses in Jin's thought processes, which feel off, not like I would have him think he would act.
The Good:
It made me check out Solo-Leveling again and find that there was an after story that I hadn't read before.
The Bad:
The English it is written in is barely a step up from machine translations. Wrong words, wrong times, no proper punctuation, run-on sentences with lots of... that make it hard to read and feel like everyone and everything is stuttering non-stop. Reading this is making me dizzy.
The System helping Grayfia too feels stupid, since it starts helping her level up, like The Gamer, with instant dungeons. I just don't get why it is going down that route.
Spare yourself the headache and pass on this one.
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I am not going to rate, since I couldn’t read the whole thing. I can still share my two cents tho. The story itself may be alright, you may like it - feel free to give it a try. However, I can’t tell you what’s going on, since I couldn’t bear reading it. My brain just wasn’t braining, since author doesn’t use neither commas or actual sentences. You will rarely see a full stop anywhere. Instead, you will see a lot of “... ”, by that I mean, even between words, not only sentences (for example “How... are... you doing? I am doing fine... thank you). So, I am stopping at chapter 15, feel free to read through, maybe this will change.
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