Here are the alternate month names that I am using for this setting:
January - Whitehelm
February - Rimewake
March - Frostflee
April - Raincrown
May - Sunswell
June - Dayhelm
July - Highglow
August - Lustertide
September - Amberfall
October - Scarlettide
November - Withergrasp
December - Darkhelm
So far it looks really good and fun, no criticism here. The protagonist is so captivating and at the same time real. She struggles and has grown throughout the story (at least so far).
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Around a 4, (Made at chapter 26) (Will probably increase to a 5, if quality stay the same or increases up to the chapter 50 mark).
The story so far is pretty good. There hasn't been too much action to comment on but its been good, characters are well developed, the growth of Ebonheim herself has been a treat of the story.
A Kingdom/village building with a god isn't exactly uncommon, but does a lot of things fun with the concept. Ebonheim feels like a combination of the guardian and child of the village, where they both grow and learn off each other. The bond Ebonheim has with her village and the environment is also nice to see how that develops.
So far the story still feels very much in its early phases, so I'm very curious on how aspects of it will develop, but I guess I just have to wait and see.
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