11 chapters in and... I would pay for the rest of the book if it was already done. Without a doubt, fleshed out characters, wonderful dialogue, excellent pace, wonderful interactions, and I love the magic system so far. It's been briefly explained and it sounds well thought out. Guys, just give it a shot, this is SS-tier writing so far, which will probably change and I'll keep you updated here, but good God, this man can write.

24chaps in, and boy is this now easily Z-tier writing. As we get more screen time we get more information about each character. And the more we learn about each character, the more you tend to fall in love with them. I sh*t you not some of these interactions have given me the physical reactions like heart rate rising, sweaty palms, tingles in ma mingles, just everything is top f**king quality. I have a high critique rate for good books I'll be honest, and this author is f**kin smashing them to bits. Grammar is high end publish book quality, the depiction of scenes leave your mind overwhelmed with imagery in the best way possible, interactions leaving you wanting more, almost a carnal desire. This is probably the best written book I've read on this cite, without a doubt, and is now one of my favorites and we are just barely scratching the surface of this magnificent beast.

Epilogue

... Wow, just f**kin wow. That was a ride I will never forget, and more than likely come back to read multiple times as I wait for more. First let get the ratings out of the way.

Grammar 10/10

Plot 10/10

Writing style 10/10

Dialogue 10/10

Fight scenes 10/10

Spicy content... 13/10 arrived for spice stayed for the nice

Character development 11/10

Pacing 10/10

For his first time writing... a well damn deserved 1^42069*69420/10

I can NOT get across no matter how hard I try that you should read this. Imagine the worst possible unitchable place in public thats blazing with the worst itch you've ever felt. That is how bad you need to read this. You will not regret it at all. I promise. *

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Tarloso

Status: c0

Jul 23, 2023

An excellent story, well planned and full of characters that develop over the story.A good page turner and a excellent stand alone but also segqaying into a multi book series. Read this!!!!..... and ask for more!!!!!!?

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Forgecoldiron

Status: end of book 2

Jan 31, 2024

An outstanding tale of love, pain, and growth. A 30 something man trying to put his life back on track after a heart breaking betrayal, puts his life on the line to save three women he has never seen before finds out he is more special than just being a heroic good man. Follow his story to see him grow with love, compassion, tragedy, and discovery.

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DLRhanna

Status: epilogue

Jul 9, 2023

A very well written and precise world is in the pages of this book. While I am not a huge fan of modern fantasy, as it is hard to balance modern weapons and magic, FGSmith makes it work. The magic has rules and systems to it that makes it so it isn't too broken, and guns are not under-powered.

So if you are into fantasy and into heram themed stories give it this one a shot.

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Perc_30

Status: c22

Jun 28, 2023

The writing is genuinely published book worthy. I only wish there were more chapters and more chapters per week. 5/5 probably one of the best works on this site. It’s so good I’d literally pay to read more

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