Liked the prequel quite a bit and have been keeping up with the continuation as well, but it is getting harder to just read this anymore. The prequel was fun and chaos with some 'lemons" as they say.

Now reading the continuation it seems like the author just decided to go the fan service route instead of actual story or world building or anything in general. Almost every, and I mean EVERY, chapter is just about how the girls are horny and like to ogle each other in the nude or otherwise. It just has become disappointing at this point and I'll probably be dropping it if nothing really changes.

If you just want to read about 3 couples lusting after each other and/or after one of their mother with some chapters about actual story or any other progression in terms of anything really then this may just be the one for you.

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Nyaa

Status: C.009

Jul 28, 2023

More talking; less doing.

That's the trend that started towards the end of book 1 and continued into the sequel.

As more characters keep getting added, we just keep spending more time on their idle conversations and ever less on the events of the story.

What is shipping now is very different from the original product that I fell in love with.

Gone are the days where Sophia was destroying common sense on a daily basis. Gone is the excitement of frequently messing thngs up in interesting ways. Even the little angel we all adore appears infrequently like an afterthought.

This is what you get when an author transitions away from what originally made their story a huge success.

It has reached the point where we are getting 2 chapters of idle chatter per week with no excitement in sight. Chapters with actual entertainment value seem to be rare now. I'm beginning to think that my time will be better spent elsewhere. This is sad because I've already invested so much of my time back when this was actually still good...

While the first half of book 1 was a fun read that I'd previously been willing to recommend to anyone, I honestly can't advise anyone to invest their time in this with where it is headed now.

Book 1 is great, but I'd recommend you don't start the road to disappointment.

Unfortunately, the cake is a lie.

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If you're here for a rom-com slice-of-life with EXTREMELY slow pacing, this MAY be your thing.

If you're here for the chaotic thrills of the first part, you'll only disappointment.

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Edit: I was pleasantly surprised to find a bit of excitement in the first 10 chapters. Let's see if it lasts or if it falls back into the same rut that plagued the second half of book 1.

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Tartansilver5

Status: c0

Jul 8, 2023

ahem ahem.... Book 2 of a great slice of life story. Hit up book one if you haven't and then meet us here when you have caught up. Great group of characters, a good author, and equally good group of readers we like to relax and have ourselves some cookies and have a good time.

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