Grammar: up to par to other story that iv'e read and haven't noticed anything other then the occasional 1 letter mistake
World building: pretty small but not because of lack of detail but there only being 12 chapters
characters: there pretty fleshed out the MC feels real gets scared, cries and laughs like a real person not some 2D op character
Story: follows a young adult living life as a crippled vampire and gets to live life how he should've but with a cost
Disclaimer not a critic or anything of the like just read a lot an like what I like
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Grammar: up to par to other story that iv'e read and haven't noticed anything other then the occasional 1 letter mistake
World building: pretty small but not because of lack of detail but there only being 12 chapters
characters: there pretty fleshed out the MC feels real gets scared, cries and laughs like a real person not some 2D op character
Story: follows a young adult living life as a crippled vampire and gets to live life how he should've but with a cost
Disclaimer not a critic or anything of the like just read a lot an like what I like
Read More