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Main Character: [Reflectomancer] [Mordret Valorborn], the [Cursed child].
Zephyr Satoru, an Asian-American archeologist goes into depression after a heavy heartbreak. In order to recover from it, he plays a VR game called [Lord of Mirrors.]
The start is great and catchy. (The novel is consistent but the uploads aren't)
Zephyr is trying to play the role of the Lord with a soft heart.
The dialogue and interactions between characters are great but the lack of battles and wars makes it boring as of now.
While it does lack the BLAST it promised initially, (even after 37 chapters).
The Novel itself is not bad for the first attempt of the author, but his inconsistency is problematic.
The concepts like Beast Raid, smuts, and brutality aren't new but the way they are approached is. Characters like Eliza, Rebecca, Karen, and Maria are good but I want to see them in action.
Jon and Sam are Sobo. The same goes for Zephyr.
The Novel is still in its initial phase, so I expect something more. Hopefully, the author will become more consistent.
Currently, the Novel isn't updated even after a month and a half and is stuck before the most awaited Beast Raid.
The [Mirror Taint] is unclear. The strategies aren't visible. The direction where it's headed is hard to discern as well.
BTW, I edit this novel.
Except for the author's inconsistency, I see no problem with the concept and current progress.
He swore to write 28 chapters this month, but I still haven't received any draft, so don't blame me.
One special mention: The ending is prepared, so all that is left is to write, write, and write and complete the novel sooner.
If you are reading this review, please give it a try! Although Mongrel is awkwardly social, he is bad with words.
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