Lee Min-Ho died, his death was really pathetic, to think that he would die due to tripping over his own leg and hitting his head on a lamp post while he was crossing the road. He woke up in another world, but not everything is as easy as it seems since he woke up in the Marvel World.
"NO NO NO , I'm going to die. How am i to survive in a world of gods, superheroes, aliens and an angry purple potato bent on deleting half the universe!!"
[Multiverse Game Maker system booting up..... 40%....70%.....100%]
[Welcome Host]
I'm reading it and the story looks promising. It mix 2 of my favorites genres, Marvel and game design. That's all you need to get me hooked 😉
If that's not enough it has my favorite Marvel superheroine as the love interest!! 😤
And there's times when you can imagine some funny stuff, as an army of Groots having an awesome speech before going to war, based in some jokes that the author makes. 🤣
Anyway, worth reading till now, let's hope that it keeps that way 🙏
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It's boring. It starts out acceptable, but instead of improving it stays that way. Because it's boring? Because it tells you everything. It doesn't show it to you. At first yes, but then no. It introduces a forced romance which practically takes one chapter and sums it all up. We practically didn't hear the girl speak XD.
Now, the problem that makes this fanfic fail in the... 5 chapters that I saw (the author is a rookie) is that there are no more or less individual reactions from the players. We only see a guy who beat a game and then played it again live, but apart from some normal comments, the sensation is not explored and etc.
And the protagonist gets into the romance too quickly. He goes to a restaurant to eat. He looks like he is a high-end one, he sees himself with a girl. The narration tells you that he is unable to take his eyes off the protagonist, he doesn't tell you why XD. There is no curiosity or anything. She just can't stop looking at him.
And then the whole story is summarized for you like the entire chapter. The girl smiled at him, and so did he. The protagonist cannot stop remembering his smile and etc. Wtf?
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