Not good. This is really weirdly written smut piece with little story to it. It is more like a 2-3 star novel but unfortunately most people who read a bit and then dropped it won’t give a review.
Do not let the writing style put you off, it is a mix of Japanese and Korean style minimalist sentences instead of paragraphs. Going in, It had surpassed my expectations. This level of character development is great for a novel of this genre. If I were to nitpick, I wished that he would use this ♥ ♡ instead of colored hearts, as it is too bright and noticeable. I also notice some pronounce mistakes here and there. I think the story could reach greater heights if the author slowly incorporates more paragraphs style writing as he continues, it will bring greater color to the world building and imagining the background. Lest it will suffer the lack of descriptions and create dullness which were a common critique of Japanese/Korean web novels in particular. The writing styles of such creates a fast pace story, which suffers a lack of fleshing out of the world around them.
Reincarnated into a new world Dave lives a miserable life until he finally awakens the NTR system that turns his life upside down.
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Just a heads up the NTR refers to the system requiring Dave to NTR other peop
I woke up naked and all alone in a summoning circle, the only clue to my past is a demon summoning book and the hazy memories of a world very different from the one I find myself in now. I should probably be more concerned with the changes that ha
Hello~! My name was — well, it doesn’t really matter, my name is… no, wait, that doesn’t matter either… hrm. Okay. Here’s what does matter.
I died and was reincarnated into an eroge. You know, a porn
Honey is an Ex Esports pro in VRMMORPGs. Taken out due to her dominant demeanor, she was outcasted despite her skills. She was too Dominant For the shier men around her in the leagues. Her once-promising career ended, and she Started Sleep Streami
Book 1, Summoned to another world with mechs. This world is going to be my bitch. I will build horrors that will bring this world to its knees. (Evil Laugh) That is if I can avoid becoming a slave or getting killed. Starting gear. Six gold (Maybe)
Not good. This is really weirdly written smut piece with little story to it. It is more like a 2-3 star novel but unfortunately most people who read a bit and then dropped it won’t give a review.
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Do not let the writing style put you off, it is a mix of Japanese and Korean style minimalist sentences instead of paragraphs. Going in, It had surpassed my expectations. This level of character development is great for a novel of this genre. If I were to nitpick, I wished that he would use this ♥ ♡ instead of colored hearts, as it is too bright and noticeable. I also notice some pronounce mistakes here and there. I think the story could reach greater heights if the author slowly incorporates more paragraphs style writing as he continues, it will bring greater color to the world building and imagining the background. Lest it will suffer the lack of descriptions and create dullness which were a common critique of Japanese/Korean web novels in particular. The writing styles of such creates a fast pace story, which suffers a lack of fleshing out of the world around them.
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