Not good. This is really weirdly written smut piece with little story to it. It is more like a 2-3 star novel but unfortunately most people who read a bit and then dropped it won’t give a review. 

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First 20 chaps was a 4/5 for me, not perfect, but at least enjoyable.

After that it seems that author felt the need to forcefully cram in romance and sh*t into the story.  Very forced and terribly executed romance at that.

The protagonist actually managed to fool himself that hes "in love" with his slaves. Slaves being the women he manipulated, r*ped and enslaved. 

How thoroughly mind f*cked and pathetic do you have to be to fall in love with your slaves whom you tormented? 

If you get cold feet about wiring an evil protagonist author, then why did you even bother trying? Smh.

Also interactions between characters are terribly written and awkward.

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Do not let the writing style put you off, it is a mix of Japanese and Korean style minimalist sentences instead of paragraphs. Going in, It had surpassed my expectations. This level of character development is great for a novel of this genre. If I were to nitpick, I wished that he would use this ♥ ♡ instead of colored hearts, as it is too bright and noticeable. I also notice some pronounce mistakes here and there. I think the story could reach greater heights if the author slowly incorporates more paragraphs style writing as he continues, it will bring greater color to the world building and imagining the background. Lest it will suffer the lack of descriptions and create dullness which were a common critique of Japanese/Korean web novels in particular. The writing styles of such creates a fast pace story, which suffers a lack of fleshing out of the world around them. 

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