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I thoroughly enjoy the captivating worldview and characters within this series. However, I find that a clearer exposition of the world-building would enhance the overall experience. For instance, it would be beneficial to elaborate on what happen to the players' bodies who entered into the game. Do they enter a state of hibernation within capsules, leaving only their brains active, or do they entirely disappear and transform into data? Additionally, delving deeper would provide greater insight for the reader. Whether through direct explanation or integration into the plot.
One aspect that impresses me is how NPCs like natives rather than merely serving as lifeless entities and focusing only on the players. Lastly, I hope for more frequent updates to the series and to continue maintaining this quality.
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