If you've read SCOG it definitely has a similar feeling. 

By chap 10 you'll already have a solid grasp on who MC is in general. Fights are good, description of the foes/monsters feel a bit lacking but easily understood regardless. A number of side characters to expand upon already, and despite only brief interactions they're interesting enough to want to know more about. Worldbuilding is still being setup but for 10 chaps it does get one interested about both sides, tbh im more interested in the 'mundane' side of the world than the 'supernatural' other side.. 

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A few interesting plot points have been revealed and It's keeping my Interest. The fights were explained relatively well and are main character has a clear character. The reason this is a 4 star Is because I want to know more about the other characters, of course It's only ch10. As of now It's worth reading. 

EDIT: For Anyone that likes this there's about 20 more chapters on Royal Road as of the 22 of December 2023

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Starting with the obvious, the sentence structure, phrasing and grammar have no problems, which already sets the novel far above the average.

I don't think I ever read something that started quite like this one on the sense that everything feels already... pre-established? What I mean is, her life, her situation, her friends and even her already having a girlfriend before the novel even begins. 

I think what comes closest to it would be something like Fairy Tail where Natsu is already from the guild, but even then it starts with the protagonists Lucy and Natsu meeting for the first time and then proceeding to get the guild introduced bit by bit to Lucy (and therefore, us.)  

Anyway, I don't really know if the former point is positive or negative, really. My personal taste would prefer it having a different prologue, or maybe actually just adding a one altogether and just moving the first few chapters ahead as it's not as if it had to be deleted considering there's nothing wrong with them.

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