By Bartend
A 25 year-old parking attendant met his bullies on high school, seeing both of them successful angered him. To make his anger worst, both of them didn’t even apologizes to him for what they did. Suddenly, everything around them stopped. They
A Great and funny and dark and interesting story what more do you need to know.
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This Review has some spoilers!
This story has a lot of similarities to a game called Prototype (I am not certain if it was used as an inspiration) from *some* of the infected variants and the MC gaining mutations from consumption of the infected and the MC being someone who apparently will become someone who wants to be a 'savior', although that leans more towards prototype 2
That is where the majority of the similarity ends, the story here is more comedic than the blurb would suggest and the jokes are a mixed bag for me; some of them land ok, some are meh and some feel little distasteful. That could be personal choice though, I would prefer a more gritty and grounded story but I can ignore the comedic undertones so it doesn't bother me too much
The main love interest is underage (16 to be exact) and the MC is 22, that choice feels weird I see no point to it other than perhaps for shock value and it basically adds nothing to the story, she could have been of legal age and the story would not have changed at all
There is a strong foundation here and I'll keep reading since I like the world building. I do suggest people give it a shot and make their own decisions as the many aspects will come down to personal tastes
I also suggest the author adds the comedy tag on the front page
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