It's evident that the author has a clear idea of where (s) he wants to go with the story, and some measure of world-building, but the execution is very dry and boring. So far the story has been 10 chapters of info-dumps. I feel like I've been reading a wiki page this entire time.
It's evident that the author has a clear idea of where (s) he wants to go with the story, and some measure of world-building, but the execution is very dry and boring. So far the story has been 10 chapters of info-dumps. I feel like I've been reading a wiki page this entire time.
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