The premises is interesting... BUT very poorly executed! It has the feel of one of those Chinese novels where they over explain everything in six different ways, and reiterate things from previous chapters that aren't worth reiterating. Basically wasting your time and forcing you to skip paragraphs just to move along the story. But the part that gets on my nerves the most, is this constant asking for money at the end of each chapter when there's only four chapters, and there's hardly a story. I mean I'm all for a Patreon account and I help support several authors on it, but they have at least 80 to 100 chapters before they start asking for anything and they're always updating their free chapters... That is where I stand. I mean if you're going to try to force people to pay for chapters, they need to be worth something. These are not. 

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