Embark on an epic journey with Luke Ashburn as he enters the Main God Space, a convergence of worlds teeming with unique challenges. Follow Luke's odyssey through diverse realms, witnessing his quest for strength and self-discovery as he travels from one world to another, completing missions that propel him towards unparalleled power.
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World:
1. The Asterisk War
2. Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon? (Danmachi)
3. ...
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I would have given this a 1-2 stars if I only read through the first world, though, I've given this a 3 stars due to the danmachi world.
Overall, I would skip the first world altogether and move on to the danmachi world. All you need to understand is that the MC made some sword techniques from the first world and you should be fine for the most part.
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I would say this is a rather solid story. It's not anything really original but it is satisfying to read.
If I were to compare it to a meal... it's above making yourself a sandwich and below an expensive meal at a nice restaurant that you'll remember going to a few months later. So maybe a nice burger from a local burger joint that leaves you satisfied and happy but would not particularly stand out in your memories a week or two later when you think about what you did back then.
So I rate it somewhere between 4.0 (good) and 4.4 (better than good but not yet excellent) overall. I rounded up to 5 because becasue I feel the story/author has potential to push this rating up in the future.
If I were to give advice to the author to improve the story, I would say work on giving more depth to the personality of the characters. Hmmm, that might not be quite right. Distance, focus, connection. Connection might be a better word. Your characters aren't flat but it's hard for me as a reader to feel a connection or resonance to them sometimes. I'm not a writer so you'd have to get advice from one who is on how to get better at that.
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I took the advice of others and started reading from the Danmachi arc starts.
Really liking the story so far but based on other reviews its the first part bring the score down. Can only advise doing what I did and starting on chapter 59.
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1. Ch1-ending, the author doesn't know how to properly write an English sentence and just makes word soup every ch which makes trying to figure out what the author is trying to write more complicated and not enjoyable.
2. So far MC doesn't have a back story as of ch 50, and has no real depth causing readers not to care about MC very much, and the same could be said for every character in the story.
3. 75% of the story is filled with info that is overly explained and not relevant to MC or story but is present in every ch.
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