The story idea is pretty good, however the Grammar is absolutely horrid.

Most of the sentences don't make any sense at all, and there are a bunch of words that don't belong in a-lot of spots, most of the time it's very hard to understand what is happening because of this.

2/5 Would only recommend if you are High or Wasted.

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This is cruel, but reading this honestly felt like I was writing some chunibyou kid's scribble writing of a story idea he decided to flesh out a tiny bit.

Though I wanted to be more lenient, I ended up completely agreeing with the other review (Death) complaining about the grammar. It is very obvious that the author does not do a double check for editing or just rushes either the writing or checking process.

And reason I said chunibyou, was the MC is just one of those "cool" types that are cool headed and quiet. And we have that together with a heavily forced FL insert (Boa Hancock), whose iq seemingly plummeted to the abyss, as she became a cardboard cut delivery harem member.

The writing is very very bare bones. It really just feels like a story where the author is just writing what he envisions goes on in his head, and writes it down to again, flesh it out a tiny bit, and more importantly, make an actual story so he can look back to in the future and also to just build up on his story he constantly is daydreaming about.

Though I completely support the Author and hope he doesn't drop due to people review bombing, but for readers, I just can't recommend this at all due to the editing / word flow

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