Unlike the synopsis, the novel itself is not bad.

Good grammar and an okay writing style.

This novel is heavily AU. Additional characters, removed characters, somewhat different organizational structures. All of that heavily affects the plot and happenings. This is not a story that would be enjoyable to read for people who can't stand non-canon. On the other hand, it's fairly good if you don't really care about sticking to canon. Notably, so far there has been no real tampering with or nerfing of the power of the canon characters. Hopefully that keeps up.

Something else to take note of, is that smut scenes are not overly frequent (so far), and when they occur, they take several chapters, so reading this in a web novel format, one chapter every few days, might not be optimal. Seems good for binge reading though.

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Pacing of the story was not consistent. Felt too slow at times and too fast in other parts. While the story as a whole is decent, not very much happens and is boring with a few interesting things sprinkled throughout the chapters. Lastly the chapters are too short, which also takes from the story and is caused by author trying to stretch out the story as far as they can to make money on different sites like patreon or something similar.

TLDR

-* for chapters being extremely short

-* pacing of storyline is inconsistent, with majority of story being filler

-* lemon scene's are more in the telling category and very little to no showing.

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