I hate this!
I absolutely hate this!
Mum was just brought away from her place at work by some insects and no one knows where they've left to.
I want to help her.
If only I wasn't in the middle of laying eggs!
I already feel lighter, but at the same time pressing these eggs out is exhausting.
Even in this state I wanted to rush to my mother's help but wasn't allowed.
I wasn't allowed!!!
Kyska and Miwa even pressed me back on the throne.
Not very difficult, since I without any strength left in my body couldn't do much against this.
They weren't forceful but like this, I could just proceed.
I feel like an egg-laying machine.
I am not even allowed to move when it matters.
However, what I could do was to give the order to find her.
I don't have thirty hunters for no reason.
I could barely perceive what happened, as fast everyone who could in this situation was suddenly gone.
I just hope they got the "alive" part.
One hundred.
One hundred eggs of considerable size.
Ever pressed out one-hundred eggs in a row?!!
My waist feels completely numb and sore at the same time.
The only positive part is that my belly started directly to shrink back, as if it was made to go through such an extension, without suffering from any lasting effects.
With this, I feel so much lighter now.
Yet at the same time completely empty.
Not that I liked my stuffed state but now it feels like all my innards got removed.
And would you believe it, I still cannot move!
This whole session took all my energy, which makes it impossible to stand up again.
Kyska made sure to direct her responsibilities so she could be here when the laying started.
Suki was during that time in charge of the courtyard, while Kyska managed the horror that transpired in this room.
I could just manage to convince Miwa and Kyska to relocate me to a bench, away from that dreaded throne.
Does this thing have to stay there?
It's like a symbol for something I seriously don't want to be reminded about.
At the moment, I can just lie on my side on that bench and try to massage my stomach somehow, without scratching it with my rather sharp nails.
Did I ever mention that they grew, as my nurses abstain from shortening them?
And this has to be done actively, as they are presumably of the same insect carapace material and like this extremely durable.
However, at the moment I don't feel like addressing this in my condition.
It's anyways a little difficult at the moment with Kyska, since she schemed quite a bit against me recently.
Naturally not with ill intent.
The moment I started this royal guard thing it was already a set event.
Nonetheless, I made sure to tell her that next time I want to be informed in advance about stuff like a throne in my room or this whole setup to put me on this thing during my sleep.
You're asking why I'm collected enough to think about stuff like this when my mother was abducted?
A short time after I gave my order to the hunters to bring her back this instant, a messenger came to inform me that Liseti found her and is on the way to bring her back.
I was asked to revoke my order to the hunters, mostly to prevent bloodshed, as they were rather committed to fulfilling their task.
Naturally, I did so.
Liseti is basically my friend, if that concept can be applied here, and I can for sure trust her to bring my mum back to me.
So letting my hunters rip them apart would be the wrong course of action.
All's well that ends well.
Just need to get rid of that feeling as if my stomach collapses to the inside.
<My princess, your mother has reached the courtyard.> (Sk)
If I could I would directly rush to her, but my legs are too wobbly for this.
All I managed to do was to get up on this bench and order me a blanket to cover my body so I can properly welcome her.
It's not really hard to notice their arrival, as Liseti along with her escort makes more than enough noise to notice.
Yet the first ones to enter are Suki and Kyska.
"My princess..." (K)
What is with her?
She looks so dejected.
"What is wrong?" (E)
I am starting to feel uneasy.
It's rare to see Kyska troubled by something and Suki doesn't look any better.
"Your mother..." (K)
The words hit me badly.
<Screeak!/What is with my mum?!> (E)
Didn't Liseti say she would be brought here?
Isn't she alive?
Did something happen?
Was she dismembered?
Disfigured?
Mortally wounded?
What is with my mum?!!
"Please, my princess. You have to calm down." (K)
She talks intentionally in human language to soothe me, however...
<Don't tell me what I have to do!! I want to know what is with my mum!> (E)
"Please, my princess, you emit too strong pheromones. It's agitating..." (S)
<Scrieek, Skreeeek!/What do I care who is agitated?! What is wrong with my mum?!!> (E)
"W-we will bring her in." (K)
They'll bring her in?
So she's well enough for this?
Then Liseti enters, accompanied by two messengers and... mum!!
She looks well and healthy, yet she is practically cowering behind Liseti and I don't know why.
She looks almost afraid.
I inspected my body and nothing looks too unusual.
So why does she hide from me?
"M-mum? What is wrong? I was so worried! I still don't know what happened. Are you fine?" (E)
She looks at me, but her gaze is unsteady and wavers sometimes back to Liseti, who herself seems slightly unsettled.
Which unsettles me even more.
Then mum moves a very short distance in my direction.
She seems to contemplate what to say.
But ultimately she makes a decision.
<Hi Ery. A lot happened and it became complicated but... I, I'm mostly fine./Crik, creeek!> (F)
"You are alright? God, I'm so relieved. You..." (E)
What was that!?
"C-could you please repeat that?" (E)
<C-creak./I... Something happened. My throat. I cannot speak.> (F)
I panic.
Mum can't speak!
Even more, I can feel how much this weighs on her.
Wait! I can feel it!?
Pheromones!
Mum is emitting pheromones!
Why? Why is that so?
Everyone is so serious!
Is that permanent?
Am I the reason?
Is all of this my fault?
Mum starts to cover her head with her hands as if she is totally devastated.
She also retreats from me.
So it is my fault?
Is she angry with me?
<Criek, craek!/Erys, you have to calm down. The pheromones of a princess are many times stronger than an average drone's and cannot be ignored. And you tend to scream especially intensely in your agitation. You put a terrible burden on your mother.> (L)
I, I am hurting mother?
So this was why she held her head?
She is already in a bad state and I am screaming everything down.
But why can she feel this?
Only Formicea should be able to sense pheromones or emit them or talk in creaks.
Just what happened?!
<I can explain the situation. Shall we converse now or should we first bring your mother away?> (L)
This suggestion might sound cruel, throwing mum out while she is in that state, but the intention is reasonable.
Liseti's point is that, as agitated as I am I will just make everything worse for her.
And she is right.
I can barely contain myself.
<Kyska! Suki! Please attend to my mother. Do everything she wishes for and what you deem necessary.> (E)
I can't help it that my tone turns dark.
I really have to strain myself here.
"Immediately my princess. Miss Farrah, would you accompany us?" (K)
She nods.
Probably because she doesn't want to speak.
I wait till they are out.
Then I turn to Liseti.
<Scriik!/Now please tell me who is responsible for that.> (E)
I know that my mind can barely keep up, while I wait for Liseti to start explaining what lead to my mother's state.
From the looks alone, I can assume that she wasn't involved.
Mum even clung to her during my prior outburst.
She wouldn't do that to the one who harmed her.
This means someone else is at fault.
<What happened? Who did this to my mother?> (E)
I don't even bother anymore with human speech.
It feels like my fury wouldn't get through.
<It was Honiu.> (L)
Okay. I have a name.
Not that it would help me in any way to direct my rage.
<And who is that?> (E)
<I once told you, that this hive housed two princesses before you came. She is the second.> (L)
<A princess? But why mum? Why did she do this?> (E)
<Simple curiosity. She formally oversees the nursery and through this came into contact with your mother while she worked there.> (L)
<But... If someone this dangerous was there, why did you let my mother go to this place?> (E)
<A misjudgment on my side which I'm deeply ashamed for. Princess Honiu is in general not active. She almost never leaves her district and just concentrates on her production. I never would have thought that she would take interest in anything other than this.> (L)
<She hurt my mum because she was in a mood?! Where is she? Tell me!> (E)
"What will you do with this information?> (L)
<I will, I will...> (E)
<Yes? What are your intentions? To challenge her? While I value our alliance and am indebted for my mistakes, I won't support you in a swarm war! And on your own, you will lose. She is far more powerful and that her brood exceeds yours is a given.> (L)
<I don't know! I just want her to know she was wrong. Maybe slap her. Shout at her! Whatever I can.> (E)
<This might actually amuse her. Honiu has nothing in her life she values. But if she finds something interesting, this distracts her from her boredom.> (L)
<She has nothing? I thought she has control over the nursery.> (E)
<While this is true, the nurses are self-sufficient and can easily maintain order on their own. She might even have thought that your mother is an irregularity the nurses can't deal with themselves. Like this, she wanted to make her fit in, performing some adjustments towards that goal.> (L)
The most terrible is that it reminds me so much about what the queen did to me.
<How could a princess do this? How could she change mum? I thought just the queen was able to change people.> (E)
<While the queen is superior to her, you should be aware that a princess is a being that could, if the necessity arises, at any time become a queen. If you think about it, a princess is a small queen and we all carry all the hereditary information of our species. These minor adjustments Honiu invoked are nothing.> (L)
<Is there any way to help my mum?> (E)
<I'm sorry, I doubt it. It's already unusual to influence another species like this. It's the same with you. You were given a part of us. Influenced by our hereditary information. Reverting means not just taking away but it has to be replaced. Yet we cannot give something we don't have. Yet I need to admit that my knowledge about the actual process is limited. Honiu is far more proficient in this. Especially if you consider that she is old.> (L)
<Old?> (E)
<I don't know her exact age, but it should be more than two-thousand cycles. Maybe even three-thousand. She lived through the whole swarm wars and with both her age and the things she's seen, she has become a being that isn't interested in her surroundings anymore, aside from initial curiosity, which always soon diminishes.> (L)
<How can someone become like this?> (E)
<Do you remember when I told you about different ways to treat a princess? Honiu is a product of this. She just laid eggs in her old hive, just focusing on this sole task. Until our forces broke through and claimed her. But this was a harsh experience. She lost something. After she was claimed she was used as a hostage to subdue her brood. Drones cannot act if it would mean risking harm to their broodmother. So she witnessed how her whole brood was slaughtered and her old swarm perished. All her efforts came to waste. This made her apathetic. Since then she just lays eggs as she has always done, because she has nothing else.> (L)
<The swarm claimed her? Like a prize?> (E)
<You sound as if you would condemn this, but it's simply the way things are in the swarm. During the swarm wars, an enemy princess was either killed or taken. In the end, all swarms went for the latter. This way our ability to produce future generations was secured. A princess may be a special existence, but she belongs to the swarm that controls her. She has to produce brood and is not free to choose.> (L)
<But, but did they really play along? Forced to support their former enemy?> (E)
<Most of them. If they didn't die immediately they complied. A princess is her function to lay eggs, nothing else. This is her sole reason to exist. Just because we are granted preferred treatment you shouldn't forget that we have a set role. And because of that, I cannot allow you to cause havoc in the hive because of something like a personal grudge.> (L)
This is no nice thought.
In general, it seems like a princess is just a facility to them.
She shall have no thoughts of her own and can just like this be taken and installed at another place.
And this while they told me my wishes would be respected.
<You told me my family would be safe and now this! What is if this Honiu repeats what she did? At next becomes interested in my little brother and abducts him? This is all so terrible!> (E)
<While I apologize for my lack of foresight, I wouldn't say that they're not safe.> (L)
<Not safe!? My mother is...> (E)
<Unharmed and in good health.> (L)
<How can you say she's unharmed?> (E)
<While she can now receive and emit pheromones, this shouldn't negatively affect her. For her throat, albeit it was changed, this isn't dangerous to her life. She can simply live on.> (L)
<She cannot speak!!! I don't know how to tell dad.> (L)
<Aren't you more than able to speak human words? Like this, it should be manageable to recover her speech.> (L)
<That's not it! It's very hard to form the words!> (E)
<But not impossible. The changes on your mother are negligible compared to yours. Rather than going to Honiu, you should help your mother. You know better than anyone else how to adjust now.> (L)
Helping mum or getting killed by the hive's soldiers for insubordination.
Not really a choice.
<At least... Promise me that this won't repeat. To anyone! My family must be safe!" (E)
<I will pursue this as much as I can.> (L)
She won't lie to me.
Yet this isn't as assuring as I had hoped for.
It meant if she can't help it then she can't.
<Right. Now excuse me. I have to go and help mum.> (E)
With this, she leaves and I head to my mum.
While from what i've seen most comments are negative, i personally understand this and while the accident is unfortunate she technically isn't harmed, erys should keep her family closer as the second princess and even the queen were always unknown variables
Thank you for this.
I wouldn't say they're entirely negative. It's bound to happen that not everyone likes a development. That comes down to personal taste. It's actually much easier to hear this as when they would say the story makes no sense or the characters are badly written.
Thx for the chap.
You know, MC and the other princess could really get along I think. The 2 of them was 'abduced' against their will and all. If they just talk and try to understand the other, they could do much more.
<The swarm claimed her? Like a price?> (E)
This should be prize instead of price. I am glad there is a clear solution to help her mom. This, other than being totally uncalled for, is actually pretty helpful and good for her. I can only see that they would get closer, especially with pheromones and the like.
Well, some do still better with human voice. Kyska is a genius while Liseti for example struggles quite much with making it sound right and even if she gets the pronunciation right it still sounds like nails on a chalkboard. It comes a bit to personal disposition if one can get human words right. et's see how Farrah manages.
@expentio farrah should have an advantage, due to her age and years of experience forming human words. while there is a different throat she knows by instinct how the words should sound and be formed, she just needs to learn how to form them with the different throat. and with how relatively easy Erys picked it up with a more extreme difference in throat, farrah should be just fine given time to adjust
This is a good chapter.
I might disagree with how the story goes. I might not like the things that happen. We could go argue about it and I'm sure someone will try to, and that that someone might even be me on another day.
But.
If a situation causes reader discussion, then the best way to address such a thing, IMHO, is in the book itself. Not by breaking the fourth wall, of course, but by having Erys act like this, she can be a ... spokesperson? of the readers. But she's not acting like a spokesperson - she's just being herself. It just so happens that being herself is in alignment with how the reader feels and so it makes for interesting reading.
I think this is also why people can get upset by doormat characters - sometimes, they might be written in a realistic manner (e.g. why don't the slaves fight back? - because it's been 15 years and pretty much most of the rebellious nature has been squashed) - but it's because of this disconnect between reader emotion and character emotion.
But here they line up. How dare she, we must do something about this - sure, princess, but you can't. Here's reasons. Darn it, those are good reasons. Grumble grumble grumble.
The other reason why such things ought to be addressed in story is because when you move to publish a book or to binge read it, no way am I gonna read deep into the comments for a discussion for every chapter. And if a story then fails to address the situation (e.g. a character gains a new power, but doesn't try to use it to solve a problem that was brought to light as few as 5 chapters ago, even although they know of the problem), then the story is confusing to read and the characters seem dumb or flawed or broken in a way that's inhuman. Sometimes it's just a straight up plot hole, but fine.
Anyway, good chapter.
There are some very interesting thoughts. I like to discuss my stories and speak about the development with others. On the other side, I wouldn't really want to let my characters directly act it out. If I see a point is valid, I'll try to write everything in a way it makes sense. Yet I think that one's writing shouldn't be influenced by what others want. This is the nice about webnovels. Here instead of generalizing content people still more write what they want to write which leads to a more diverse range. So I rather separate comments and writing.
I think that in an ordinary hive, such a hysterical princess like Erys would have been killed long ago as a source of hassle and scandals.
In any case, in large corporations that can be seen as a prototype of the hive, HR workers would do just that.
It's like a cranky and whiny power generator. Sure, you gotta employ more folks and it needs a whole lot of maintenance and upkeep, but if you can keep her contained then it works. The main argument for keeping her around is production and... well, depending on company structure, you can get away with a lot of things if your numbers are good.
I mean sure there's some terrible stuff in the world (e.g. sexual harassment can't be justified by "but it allows me to do 10x the work of the average employee since I can be myself"), but some folks definitely do get away with being brash or rude or late or in a state of poor hygiene whilst staying employed because of their numbers.
See also Soup Nazi and fantasy-trope blacksmiths/craftsmen who won't make stuff for you unless you can earn their trust.
that'll not happend
if queen want executive power all by herself. she would make princesses with intelligence of a worker and let schoolars unit do the management. they are as smart as princess but cost less and acn't rebel.
why would you make your only poteintial usurpers smart?
@mon5y-san Princesses are more seen as daughters. If something would happen to the queen they're thought to take over after a special treatment. Being dumb would then become a disadvantage. Evolutionary they shall spread and lead their own hives. Yet the underground system got a little cramped, so the main hive had two princesses
@expentio
queen can just pick and choose genetical features right?
then make it so that princess unit's intelligence got boost up upon becoming a queen.
and system won't crash down immediatly because management is done partly by other units.
@mon5y-san It's a bit harder here. Princesses need to be complex to do all this genetic engineering. And while they're proficient in doing so, designing a latent boost of intelligence exactly when it's needed is a bit asked to much. It's not like everything is under control with mutation.
@expentio
but it's not that hard. and many workaround.
have you seen anime called evangelion? do you know you can control monster by induce semi-coma state, gouge out its spine, and put a pilot seat in there.
so, parasitic brain unit and princess with expose nerve system.
@mon5y-san your also aware the anime evangelion also isnt real right? just Because something works there doesn't mean it "works"
@Nari fantasy giant insect that can do gene manipulation at will isn't real either. nor does magic exist.
my points? author give reason that it's impossible to do because complexity. so i give my less complex and most plausable solution. as this parasitic relationship(replace host's nerve system) is actually exist in real life.
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ophiocordyceps_unilateralis
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Leucochloridium
here's an idea author. novel about a human girl and a sapient parasite.
@mon5y-san But it doesn't really sound Formicea-like. I find they're quite simple. Gather food, protect the hive, tend to the offspring. Why would they want a smart parasite if everything works? Betrayal doesn't really happen there.
@torvn77
First thing as princess I would kill all HR workers. They are menace to be eradicated.
@expentio But apparently Honui can do an incredibly well controlled mutation in another species to alter her larynx and voice box... yep totally not controlled. You can't have it both ways. I can believe the Queen changing Erys in the way she did that seems like a pretty uncontrolled full system change. But along with other comments you made saying that princesses aren't as good as the queen and allowing Honui to do such a targeted change seems... really contradictory.
@Dividious The voice box change was one specific organ to concentrate on and directly applied there. Communication over pheromones is a very basic Formicea trait. She isn't as powerful as the queen to induce a princess change but she's very old and has the whole day nothing else to do but to think about reproduction (sounds wrong).
@expentio And genetic changes in other species should be a really hard ability to achieve ESPECIALLY targeted ones. Random mutations, yeah, that should be decently easy. But rapid, targeted, cross-species changes should be much much harder and a skill that should be more for the queen only instead of somehow on a princess. This isn't a lesser skill its a superior skill to what the queen has shown so far.