Liu Feng wanted to be a cultivator who defied the heavens, surpassed all limits, and had jade-skinned beauties clamoring around him. He wanted to fight anyone who got in his way, and shatter the arrogance of those young masters!
Unfortunately for him, he died, and now I'm stuck here.
Jade-like beauties? No thanks, I have an awesome magical energy to study.
Young masters? Life and death battles? No, I would rather read some books on cultivation, and master some techniques that clearly don't obey the laws of physics.
There is a junior who has trash talent but suddenly started advancing by leaps and bounds? And he seems to be favored by the heavens themselves? Yeah, that has nothing to do with me.
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Release Schedule: Daily, unless something comes up.
Tags and content warnings are mainly to give me creative freedom later on. This is my first novel ever, so go easy on me bruvs. Any feedback is more than welcome, of course.
REVIEW: 4.2/5
Although the title is obvious enough, the story doesn't have that much actions compared to the average xianxia. Face slapping is also not that much.... which to me is a good thing.
I don't hate it. But I hope the author can at least edit the sentences a bit. This is because chatgpt often uses grand words for no good reason. Sometimes simpler words are better in the proper context.
Especially on the dialogue, they sometime sounds like narrating instead of actually conversing.
(While reading, I like to have a mini little puzzle to figure out the sentences that the Author has prompt to get that kind of result from chatgpt XD)
Anyway in terms of pace, it's pretty slow ngl. Which I'm fine btw. But I know some people prefer fast ones.
So all in all, this is a slow burn story. I suggest to read it in a bulk rather than once everyday. (Not that I will do it myself though hehe)
I'm not saying I'm disappointed. I'm simply stating what I think.
And yes, I understand that the MC is a bookworm, so it is hard to expand on the world.... but I hope the author can work on this one a little. At least on the cultivation system and technique system.
Feedback for Author (ranked w priority) :
Chatgpt is a tool, not our teacher.
Anyway, I'm not here to rush you. In fact, take your time. I only hope you can cook the power system really well. No pressure XD.
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This has potential. The MC is smart and not the dumb protag type. It's too early for me to give a rating. I'll wait and see where this goes.
Edit - Yup, as expected, the MC has a good IQ. SIde-characters are fleshed out as well. The MC doesn't have an insane power-up or anything, and he needs to struggle to achieve anything. Progression is kinda slow but not on burn-out levels. This story can turn out to be an absolute banger, but it's gonna take a while for sure.
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Amazing, truly good, the sypnosis is true but not precise... but much more BETTER 👌.
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The chapters are long and wholesome, You will be satisfied while reading and enjoy every word, the writing quality is superb one of the best cultivation story I ever read.
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