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Entering the sectApr 19, 2024
Illuminated cavernsApr 13, 2024
Combat Test – Part 2Apr 7, 2024
Combat TestMar 17, 2024
Getting QuizzicleMar 16, 2024
ComprehensionMar 15, 2024
Sect Entrance ExamMar 13, 2024
Great Dao SectMar 13, 2024
Demon BloodMar 13, 2024
Truth-laced LieMar 13, 2024
Asmodeus the BetrayedMar 13, 2024
Behind the DoorsMar 13, 2024
Ultimate HumanMar 13, 2024
Divine AwakeningMar 13, 2024
Enbris, Phoenix of the peaksMar 13, 2024

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New Nenheto

Status: a universe greater then the...

Apr 23, 2024

I haven't got much of a review, since I really only got through the first chapter.

The idea itself seems like it could be interesting but the story, especially the first chapter, suffers from a lot of grammatical problems. I skimmed through the rest of the novel and it honestly seems like it has a solid plotline, and it would probably be a thing I'd enjoy reading. But again, it suffers from a litany of grammatical issues.

I do suggest the Author to do some chapter edits, and/or getting someone to do it for them and/or running it through a grammar checker like Grammarly or something.

I oftentimes think being too picky with grammar to be a curse, as I simply can't enjoy ideas that well... haven't got good grammar. For anyone who isn't bothered, I do suggest to read it as I couldn't see any other problems with it.

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Danish2009

Status: c0

Mar 13, 2024

Hi author I just want to say I like your novel and I'm not reading it here because I already read it at wattpat but I'll just support here to then cause I like the plot (≧∇≦)

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