I'm enjoying the story with a few complaints. I would like less of how stuck Scarlet gets in her own head repeatedly. For example, like if the topic of a punishment comes up she may spin her own wheels with thoughts about it for like 5 paragraphs each and every time; then think direct thoughts she really should be saying out loud to Melody but instead will just say one word like "... yes." It gets a little frustrating if I'm honest. Also, I may have missed it but I am unsure if these 2 have even properly made out with each other as of 39 chapters.

I'm excited to see more of the dungeon stuff. I am normally pretty blase and whatever about the system and dungeon stuff but I think the story has spent a long time establishing Scarlet and Melody and I am ready to see the story's other side before I can give this a proper rating.

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The story is really fun to read. There are almost no grammar mistakes, and the pacing is also good. The romance and fluff are certainly there, plus the relationship between Melody and Scarlet and how they interact with each other is really enjoyable! But nothing is more enjoyable than when they, you know...

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This is good. Impeccable writing style and grammar. Story told from the perspective of MC. Not much of LitRPG so far, but this is not a downside, as the story and interactions between characters are the strong point and main attraction of this work.

The quick and seamless meeting of MC with her partner who seems to be a perfect match is a minor point against the suspension of disbelief, but it is not something that matters much.

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A very enjoyable story, written from the POV of the submissive in the relationship. For such a possibly s*xually charged plot, the focus so far is on the relationship between the sub and her dom girlfriend/mistress, and the story is better for that. The s*xy times are not overwhelming the story and are more cute/lovey-dovey than hard out BDSM scenes.

The writing style, grammar, chapter structure, pacing, etc. Are all of a very high standard, this is an author that knows how to write an engaging story. The system is still not very apparent, as is the whole dungeon diving aspects, but I suspect this will be more of the story once this introductory part concludes. 

The only drawback I see is that I have to keep waiting for another chapter.

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not as hardcore as the name suggested to me but things are speeding up into some nice s*xy times ;)

what I didn't expect is how the two main leads are both cute in their own ways. Its not just bdsm but a story with a new couple. No action yet or need to use the system but I feel/hope its coming.

so far no bad grammar or spelling mistakes that I have spotted.

would recommend to anyone that wants a smut story

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