“I’m Scarlet, a horny little pet that l-loves to be hu… humiliated and abused!”
“God, Mistress, why did you make me say that!?”
She chuckled. “It was so cute, that’s why. Go on, continue your intro.”
“Ugh… when I was awakened, I got the rarest of all systems, but it was a BDSM focus and this… thi-this little submissive chose a support role because it’s—it’s the best way to serve. Please read my… my life story!”
“There! Is that enough? I said it!”
Mistress patted my head in response and pulled me onto her lap to begin our cuddling session.
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In case the title and my synopsis weren’t obvious enough, this is a BDSM focused LitRPG, which means kinks abound (take a look at the tags for some), especially pet play, along with system windows and boxes everywhere. The main relationship is yuri/girls love and will be entirely consensual and loving. Other relationships will never be described beyond a passing mention.
If you aren’t into any of the above, I’d recommend leaving right now. They will pervade the story and it will be impossible to avoid them.
Content warnings and relevant plot info will be added for some specific kinks, but the overall themes of BDSM and humiliation will have no warnings. If you ever feel a chapter should have a content warning, let me know and I’ll add one for the chapter as well as any future ones with similar scenes.
Lastly, the first chapter has pretty much no BDSM mentions, the second chapter is filled with discussion of BDSM, and the smut will start 4 chapters in after some quick exposition and build up.
Hope you enjoy! Please feel free to give me any feedback you have, I'm always looking to improve.
My schedule has been nonexistent recently... but I'm currently aiming for a chapter every other day or so, subject to change whenever I don't have time to write.
By the way, cool people join the discord: https://discord.gg/mgMUv4F8bv
I have thoroughly enjoyed this story so far. The concept behind the system being my favorite part. MC gets top tier power, but can't do anything without an owner.
Scarlet adapting to her new reality is the highlight. She's got an awesome system that bullies her and lucked out to find probably her ideal partner. She's truly lucky.
Melody is like the ideal Domme. She seems to have a good sense of pacing herself, she's very confident and warm. Above all she isn't only trying to control her kitty, she is also trying to make her a bit more direct.
The smut and plot are pretty much completely intertwined. Neither feels like it's overshadowing the other. The authors pacing is great, there's plenty of character development and we are starting to get more world building.
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This is good. Impeccable writing style and grammar. Story told from the perspective of MC. Not much of LitRPG so far, but this is not a downside, as the story and interactions between characters are the strong point and main attraction of this work.
The quick and seamless meeting of MC with her partner who seems to be a perfect match is a minor point against the suspension of disbelief, but it is not something that matters much.
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This is one of those rare, almost unicorn like, stories that have a plot while also containing plenty of smut. And just as importantly, it's very well written!I was honestly a bit skeptical in the beginning, with the system, because a lot of stories that revolve around that often either starts out with or ends up with a full removal of self-governance and independence for the MC. This is.. Consensual non-consent. The MC can ultimately decide to just say "f**k no" and bail if she wants to. I love that.
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A very enjoyable story, written from the POV of the submissive in the relationship. For such a possibly s*xually charged plot, the focus so far is on the relationship between the sub and her dom girlfriend/mistress, and the story is better for that. The s*xy times are not overwhelming the story and are more cute/lovey-dovey than hard out BDSM scenes.
The writing style, grammar, chapter structure, pacing, etc. Are all of a very high standard, this is an author that knows how to write an engaging story. The system is still not very apparent, as is the whole dungeon diving aspects, but I suspect this will be more of the story once this introductory part concludes.
The only drawback I see is that I have to keep waiting for another chapter.
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I'm enjoying the story with a few complaints. I would like less of how stuck Scarlet gets in her own head repeatedly. For example, like if the topic of a punishment comes up she may spin her own wheels with thoughts about it for like 5 paragraphs each and every time; then think direct thoughts she really should be saying out loud to Melody but instead will just say one word like "... yes." It gets a little frustrating if I'm honest. Also, I may have missed it but I am unsure if these 2 have even properly made out with each other as of 39 chapters.
I'm excited to see more of the dungeon stuff. I am normally pretty blase and whatever about the system and dungeon stuff but I think the story has spent a long time establishing Scarlet and Melody and I am ready to see the story's other side before I can give this a proper rating.
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not as hardcore as the name suggested to me but things are speeding up into some nice s*xy times ;)
what I didn't expect is how the two main leads are both cute in their own ways. Its not just bdsm but a story with a new couple. No action yet or need to use the system but I feel/hope its coming.
so far no bad grammar or spelling mistakes that I have spotted.
would recommend to anyone that wants a smut story
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The story is...
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