Menu
Read
Series Ranking
Series Finder
Latest Series
Genre
Create
Forum
Scribble HubCreateForum
/ Series / Unlimited Power – The Arcane Path
Unlimited Power – The Arcane Path
Unlimited Power – The Arcane Path
1.3M Views 27959 Favorites 467 Chapters 15 Chapters/Week 1944 Readers
3.8 (222 ratings)
Read Add to Library
Synopsis

A college student was returning home after studying abroad for several years when the end of the world happened. A dragon appeared out of nowhere and attacked the plane he was in, thanks to an incredible amount of luck and his quick-thinking, he managed to survive the plane crash only to get stuck on a tropical island.

A weird system took over the world and brought monsters to Earth. While nations collapsed and the world as a whole was being destroyed by ridiculous monsters, Leon was stuck in a godforsaken island with no chances of being rescued. What will happen to him? How will the world change while he is away? Will he even manage to return?

Genre
ActionAdultAdventureComedyFantasyLitRPGMartial ArtsMaturePsychological
Tags
Alchemy Apocalypse Artifact Crafting Artifacts Blacksmith Cooking Crafting Dark Dragons Dungeons Elemental Magic Evolution Fantasy World Game Elements Magic Male Protagonist Military Post-apocalyptic RPG Skill Books Skill Creation Survival Unlucky Protagonist
Show
  1. Chapter 46517 hours ago
  2. Chapter 46420 hours ago
  3. Chapter 463Nov 22, 2020
  4. Chapter 462Nov 22, 2020
  5. Chapter 461Nov 21, 2020
  6. Chapter 460Nov 21, 2020
  7. Chapter 459Nov 20, 2020
  8. Chapter 458Nov 20, 2020
  9. Chapter 457Nov 19, 2020
  10. Chapter 456Nov 19, 2020
  11. Chapter 455Nov 17, 2020
  12. Chapter 454Nov 17, 2020
  13. Chapter 453Nov 16, 2020
  14. Chapter 452Nov 16, 2020
  15. Chapter 451Nov 15, 2020
    Table of Contents
    Write a Review
    • 5 stars 0% (0)
    • 4 stars 22% (2)
    • 3 stars 44% (4)
    • 2 stars 33% (3)
    • 1 stars 0% (0)
    Reset Filters
      Senken
      Status: chapter 82
      Jun 4, 2020

      I’m torn. On the one hand, I’m interested, and I’m sure this will keep my attention, at least for a while longer, but on the other...

      There’s no doubt in my mind that this deserves a 4. It doesn’t have that bland, generic feel I’d give a 3 for, but it’s surprisingly hard to pin down why a 5 also doesn’t feel right. And I think that’s part of the problem. On some level, I don’t get this series. To make a long review short, there are inconsistencies that I can’t quite place and threads that just end and aren’t brought up again. A lot of them can be explained away as a product of Leon’s understandably fragile mental state or a sampling of his hardships and frustrations, but whether they should, whether they add to the experience or distract from it is tough to say. To explain that further will require some pretty heavy spoilers for... basically everything through around ch 70.

      Spoiler

      Take the skills he learned on the island for instance. Unless I missed something, he was fast and strong enough to run on water carrying a 50kg stone box. Chapters are dedicated to him training his body, dashing around the island, outrunning the fish monsters, complaining about how the box chafes... only to drop the idea almost without provocation, and his superhuman speed is never mentioned again. It’s not used to travel long distances, outmaneuver enemies, cross bodies of water, or even grind for more stat points. Depending on how generously you interpret it, that could be a bid to make the audience sympathize with Leon’s failure and desperation... or a blatant waste of time that breaks the Law of Conservation of Detail. For that matter, the Angel plants he left on the island for some reason have vanished too, and with them his Alchemy, which for all he knew could have meant he never saw a potion again. Again, was he heroically desperate or irredeemably short-sighted?

      Then there’s the fact that after he escapes the island, everything just feels... gray. Except for in a couple notable instances, Leon doesn’t emote. There’s no triumph at escaping the island, satisfaction at clearing the dungeons, excitement over new loot, and I can’t tell if that’s bad writing or a subtle nod to the trauma he suffered being alone for so long, bottling up his feelings and leveling his mental fortitude.

      [collapse]

      So, to break down my rating... all told, the series without Leon in it nets a solid 3. It’s a good foundation for the characters to dance around on. In the end, it comes down to the protagonist. Depending on how you handle subverted expectations and how you interpret his character, the rating could be... anything really, from a 1-star dumpster fire to a 5-star masterpiece. I’m on the fence personally, but for now at least, the mystery makes for an interesting puzzle. Thus, 4 stars.

      Read More

      11 Likes · Like Permalink
      TDM
      Status: c395
      Oct 13, 2020

      Re-reviewed @ Ch. 395

      I don't want to discourage the author, who has done a lot of work. There are lots of good concepts in this story worth revising and working on further. However, I think you need to better know your audience, since you are intentionally posting on RR; the story is light on LitRPG mechanics, doesn't reward the reader, and is painful for people who like to project into the charaters they are reading about (RPG fans).

      I encourage readers to read the authors next story. He is great. This story... ugh!

      Overall Score: I give high marks for the story’s grammar and some creative elements. However, at the end of the day, the review is all about whether or not I enjoy reading this story... I originally did, but lost interest! What was originally a good spin on the system apocalypse became an epic tale where the protagonist painfully grinds for multiple chapters before briefly winning, only to immediately face even bigger setbacks, and repeat, and repeat. The main character never scores a "win" that sticks, thus never feels like he advanced, even if his stats say he is improving. The most recent chapter teased some releif and then sucker punches readers when the MC finds everyone he cares about is gone, those who knew him have long forgotten him (and treat him like trash), and those he once knew super strong like him (his years of torture and solitude were pointless... he'd be equally strong, or stronger, had he stayed home). So, not fun.

      Style: Authors sentence structure, syntax and overall voice are used well. Good use of quotes, punctuation, and tables. There is little to no confusion regarding who is speaking or whose thoughts are being presented.

      Grammar: Author has a fluent grasp of English. There are occasional grammatical issues. Die-hard grammar nazis might stomp their jack-boots, but I personally didn’t have any difficulty quickly reading through chapters.

      Story: System Apocalypse genre. The author does a pretty good job of using LitRPG elements to explain the character’s development under the system. But, while some LitRPG elements are followed mechanically, the story is missing the flavor of RPG. The character has no class, titles, or clear goals. There are no rewards except for more power, which never seems to help the protagonist do anything to improve his situation. Reading the story is simply frustrating.

      Character (s) : The main character is a grinding fool who becomes unbelieveable once readers realize that he can be stuck on islands, thrown into isolation, hated by everyone, banished to strange planets, or hell, and he just keeps on going... without any real payout, encouragement from other characters (no friends or people to remember him), etc. He doesn't even seem particularly vengeful or hate-driven. Any normal person would be hallucinating and irrevocably insane. The characters motivations "I want this all to end."... which after reading the story for several hundred chapters, I TOTALLY UNDERSTAND. (The author even makes the MC impotent, so even the journey is flavorless; chasing women, or even a "crush" aren't possible for him.) In short, not relateable for readers and not fun.

      Read More

      8 Likes · Like Permalink
      Sonneillor
      Status: Chapter 110
      Jun 10, 2020

      I can't stand MC, his way of thinking that goes beyond common reasoning, it seems that his intelligence points went down the drain instead of increasing his wisdom a little. He always complains that he is unlucky but never increases his luck stat that he is at 1.

      From the beginning of the novel, both the plot and its development have many inconsistencies and are very forced in certain parts. I would like to give it 2 stars for the frustrations it made me feel but I am going to give it a 3 because despite personal opinion, objectively the novel is easy to read, you just have to turn off your damn brain.

      Read More

      8 Likes · Like Permalink
      coldpyr0
      Status: chapter 78
      Sep 18, 2020

      If you came here for a story matching the title or image, you have lost your way traveler. The MC is as American as a bowl of ramen and the story is as bland as filtered water. If you want a OP MC with some ties to reality, this ain't it cause no one who spends years alone on an island would leave after spending a week with family to handle geopolitics in a post apocalypse. Pro tip author, regular people don't drop family to ensure peace between two countries who can barely interact with each other at the moment.

      Read More

      4 Likes · Like Permalink
      Charizma
      Status: c126
      Jul 22, 2020

      I give it a solid 3 stars for a time-killer. 

      I liked the story a lot while he was trapped on the island and was grinding and learning. The MC is reasonable until you learn about his level of trust. 

      I won't go into too much detail (read the other reviews), but I will point out the issues that the other reviewers haven't been able to pin-point. 

      Spoiler

      1) Wasted Potential: A lot of tags seem to be thrown in, but are never made use of: Alchemy, Artifact Crafting, Blacksmith, Crafting, Evolution, Magic (for everyone but the MC), Skill Books. If these were expanded on just a bit, they could have added a lot to the story.

      2) Lack of empathy for the MC: You like the MC, since he is a pretty good character, but you don't really empathize with his goals much. Idk how to fix this, but it was an issue I think many will have. (Could be wrong on this one though.)

      3) World-building: Though I like the Japan arc (other the MC's trusting sometimes), the rest of the world is a bit too lack-luster. I liked the island better than North America. Specifically, it felt like the entirety of N.A. Consisted of Phoenix, Arizona and New York. I get that you might expand later, but it felt a bit too simplified. 

      [collapse]

      To the Author: I left some constructive criticism on chapter 126, if you care. That said, I enjoyed the read quite a bit these last two days and hope you keep writing and refining your skills! Thanks again!

      Read More

      4 Likes · Like Permalink
      LoweCypher
      Status: c100
      Jun 15, 2020

      What can I say... Basic system, good starting point, what else...? Oh right, an immature MC that had no growth what-so-ever.

      The guy wasted almost all his stats on Mana that can be raised by raising other stats or other methods, even the simplest ones like Luck is practically ignored while complaining on his situation or bad luck.

      That's not all, if there is one thing I learned from solidary MCs over the many novels I have read, any MC would learn to be not too trusting and always cautious of others regardless of who they are. No dumb sh*t will just say I have powerful magic to every single person he meets and let them take advantage of them. 

      It's just fiction? this is a mathafakin Fantasy-Realism if we categorize this work and this genre is known for It's limitations on how much bullcrap can be thrown. And an Japanese Isekai Beta Protagonist MC is one of the most taboo things to do in this kinds of story archetype, he's not even Japanese but an darn bloody American.

      Aiiii~ I always wonder how authors who writes with this kinds of MCs self-insert themselves in this kinds of stuff and enjoy it.

      Read More

      4 Likes · Like Permalink
      Random-Title1234
      Status: c70
      Sep 27, 2020

      I really like novels with the premise of monsters appearing in the world with rpg elements and was looking for something like solo levelling.. But I just couldn't keep reading.. Ughh

      The MC at the start of the novel is supposed to be a 22 yo college graduate, but has no experience in games.. Okay that might explain some stupid ideas and decisions he makes to some extent *though still annoying*

      But the author pushes the MC to do or don't do stuff that aren't consistent with his character without any explanation, makes it really hard me wish to slap the au** cough the MC..

      examples:

      Spoiler

      1-never even thinking about the luck stat with no explanation whatsoever.. 

      2-leave the leaves that can make potions on the island and don't think about planting them again 'alchemy skill totally forgotten, cause author says so'.

      3-blind self confidence, as if no one can hurt him

      4-has to ask for help with getting back home even though he could go on his own given his power, and even though has blind self confidence, reason offered: can't cross through the long ocean, may get involved in war if travel by land, or will get frozen to death if he goes by the roundabout route -like ice resistance doesn't exist-..

      It could have been offered a more reasonable explanation.. Like wanting to get news of his parents city.. But we get instead: the athour says so and the MC has to hurry

      5-going from a nice guy to who doesn't want to kill to someone who wants to harm and deliberately creating opportunities without paying attention to the consequences and without knowing the opponents power..

      [collapse]

      These are just a few of the top of my head, and there are a lot more problems in the details too.. And these problems just made me disconnect from the novel and can't immerse myself in it anymore as I hope the MC will die and relieve the world.. So I don't recommend it unless you don't care about logic

      Read More

      3 Likes · Like Permalink
      Sahs
      Status: chapter 39
      Sep 3, 2020

      not bad concept, but there is no plot, no goal, noting interesting happening. Only the MC wanking around.

      there is nationalism starting at c38, which left a bad taste.

      from there on the MC is op. Nothing can hurt him.! (There is the end for me.)

      Read More

      3 Likes · Like Permalink
      XXII
      Status: chapter 42
      Jun 17, 2020

      this review will be updated after I caught up with the chapters. I just want to write a simple review first since I already read a bit of chapters. To sum it up, up to ch42 it's a bit too boring. To many chapters where I feel like I didn't learn anything new about the MC, fillers for short. And his personality sometimes don't make sense sometimes he's humble to the point of calling himself dumb sometimes he's arrogant thinking he's so good and the people he interacted with is bad and look down on them. But this can be blamed on spending 4years in an island alone so..

      Edit: Im done. Final score shall be 3/5. I first can't pinpoint what I feel wrong with this novel. Then it hit me, we dont really know much about the MC. What I got from the boring 'prologue' is that he's a college student, we don't even know his major, and he wants to see his family. That's all, personality-wise we can say he's hardworking. Again, that's all. And now in chapter 60-ish he's interacting with people and occasionally saying pretentious lines thats sounds like 'they are weak bcoz they don't put effort' which is bullsh*t coz dude, u're in an island with the only 'danger' near u being fishes that u can basically smash with rocks, ofcourse u can practice while they live in a monster filled world. I think the problem is the world and character building. We didn't get 'glimpses' of what he will do in social situations so we can't 'predict' how he will act so when he goes and interact with people while trying to sound cool, to me it just sounds pretentious, like, who is this guy? The dude who tried to fly with his hands? The character is disjointed. And idk. I have so much more I wanna say. But I quit. GL.

      Read More

      2 Likes · Like Permalink
      Jul 7, 2020

      Story is nice but very linear.

      Read More

      1 Likes · Like Permalink
      X
      Write a Review
      You must be logged in to rate and post a review. Register an account to get started.
      Follow Tip
      Similar Series
      A lonely dungeon
      By cathfach
      When a new dungeon is born, it wants nothing more than to have the most vicious monsters, the most cunning traps and the most shiny of loot. There is only one problem, but it’s a rather big one; it finished its first floor years ago, but it
      Cataclysm System
      By Nefarious
      Lit-RPG story during an apocalypse _______________________________________________________________________ One day Humanity ruled the World. The next day they were gone. The system is put into play to help Humanity cope with the
      Shift
      By Shiver
      “I would sacrifice anything for my family.” This is something which heroes often shout in defiance of some great evil in stories and movies. But how would you deal with being one of the ones the ‘hero’ sacrifices?
      Journal from Another World (Indefinite Hiatus)
      By Fuyutsuki_Kaori
      One day a man was sent to another world. Was he summoned as a hero or a villain he did not know. After all he was alone in a beautiful beach, he does not possess any cheat like abilities, or powerful equipment to boost. He has noth
      Chronicles of Aonus [First Draft]
      By Roxyreads
      ⚠ This is an unfinished first draft of a story that will not see direct continuation, please keep that in mind while reading it and consider checking out the second attempt I’m working on through the link below! ⚠ Amber is 27 and havi
      Action Required
      You must be logged in to perform this action.