Since World War 2, superhumans and supernatural beings have been making waves on both sides of the law. Elissa has watched from the sidelines since she was a child. She has always been happy with that; but after a superhuman student with a grudge uses his Pyrokinetic powers to terrorize her school, Elissa has some decisions to make.
Just what do the fates have in store for young Elissa? You just have to read Superhuman Princess to find out!
Professional grade work. I've paid good money for books of lower quality.
Good grammar and prose, clearly things have been plotted out and the characters are all fleshed out.
tldr; It's basically a shounen manga power fantasy, so you might have to switch off your brain in certain ways, but if you're looking for "a good one of those" this gets a definite thumbs up and recommend from me.
Now, about those problems. I wouldn't think about these frustrations *nearly* as much if I didn't like the story as much as I do, so don't think these are dealbreakers.
Hekate is who drives the plot, not Elissa.
Elissa is not terribly clever, she's basically just a brute.
Elissa would be a Mary Sue if she weren't so bad at key things.
"Malicia was right all along!" but she gets shafted for it
Personal critiques of mine that lie mostly with the genre (some things the author may want to think about) :
The story is really good and has a lot of potential, though it has a number of issues that would need to be resolved for to to be an amazing good read.
other than those points and some continuity errors such with non humans rejoining the world (in the prologue you have them coming out in WWII but have them make their coming out again with Tesla's announcement. The story is going really well, keep up the good work.
Amazing story. Get ready for an adventure spanning multiple worlds. We meet Super Heroes, Demons and even Gods and Goddesses. SHP seamlessly blends scifi and fantasy bringing magic into our modern world.
The story right now is around half a million words long and still going strong. Can't wait for it to finally hit phase 2. Go, Elissa!
Amazing story, amazing creativity, and amazing world building!
The detail in the story is immense and the author wrote over 40 mega sized chapters where it only gets more interesting.
In conclusion, must read!
This story and MC so much to my liking that objectively its in my top list of novels for all time. Nice world building, deep and bright characters, MC who grow and change for who she feels right in time, story building that get you anticipate... ?