I enjoyed this story quite a bit up until the MC 

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From the beginning it's clear that the author is not a native english speaker.  It's admirable that they are putting themselves out there and trying to write despite this fact, but the story very badly needs an editor.  The sentence structure is very difficult to get through.  The intent is usually comprehensible with context, but parsing the wording is extremely immersion-breaking.  There are some very positive reviews, so this clearly isn't an issue for everyone.  Immersion is critical for me.

Best of luck to you, Konge.

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It's a unique idea being reincarnated as a mosquito, the names of different animals and skills are cool, I wonder if he will turn into a vampire later or something like that lol. Reason it's not a 5 is because I feel like the MC Is a bit boring and a bit monotone, though he was like that on earth so what can I say. Overall, I like it.

Edit: He has WAY more personality now, so it's a 5 now :)

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Great idea, poor execution.  MC is a douchey moron, but is rewarded for making bad decisions. Stands by while a rape happens because it's not his problem, but then goes murder hobo on the guy over a bowl of soup.  75% of the book is the author trying to explain things, or make lame excuses for the MC's bad decisions and sh*tty personality.  The pacing starts off great, but turns in to a patreon trickle format at around chapter 50.  Female characters are mindless blow up dolls that want the MC to make babies. Very flat, very predictable, very lame.  The setting is great, and the world has promise. Unfortunately, it is weighted down by abused tropes, bad characters, and a very stupid MC. I am sure some people will like it, but that is because the choices are limited in this genre and bad writing is common place. In that regard, some of it is decent but it really is a sh*tty MC with a dumb Lanister vibe.

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Just binge read this, because it was in trending.

Great story so far!!!

Definitely something that I would continue to read.

Now some quick things about the story :

Characters: not much development there, yet. Hints and bits scattered around but the dialogue of some small characters glimpse some things promising. The MC motivations till far remains just surviving and increasing strength, but he certainly is not "the good guy". He is still in Day 8.

Story : it could be a generic monster evolution type of isekai. The innovative twist is MC starting as a mosquito. Not a bad thing actually, it's entertaining so far. 

Grammar : I know it could be a deal breaker to some people and glad to announce that won't be a problem with this one. 

I think is a solid entry, the stats, names and info feels polished, you could tell the author cares about the world building and there should be a story plan in his mind. 

So mostly give it a try. 

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The story starts out interesting. Unfortunately, as in almost all such stories, the increase in strength is too extreme. In 100 chapters we go from a literal mosquito to an OP vampire, who is almost unstoppable. As usual, you have to start to introduce stronger and stronger opponents to make further growth possible.

Each introduced character has only one specific role assigned to them, and once this role is fulfilled, they become NPCs. Bob just stands around and smiles silly, while Mia turns into a s*x-obsessed bimbo.

The dialogues are extremely rare and are mainly dealt with in the next chapter as a short summary. And the few that exist are all rather shallow.

And in the meantime, the MC has become an arrogant, power-drunk asshole.

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Well I think this series is a bit original in his own way,   Many will go with monsters (this case a insect then a monster) then go somenting soo op, But this series start  applying the  say  "slow but steady win the race".

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Good

This is a story with a lot of promise. It has an interesting world with some depth and mystery. It also has a half decently done litrpg system world which makes the characters growth somewhat interesting. The beginning is quite solid and interesting, with the author neatly avoiding some of the moral clichés that plague monster stories. The plot also leaves room for a lot of growth and cool developments that could happen later. 

Bad

Unfortunately, it also has problems, mostly focused around the main character, especially when he gains humanoid form. Once that happens the story sometimes devolves into a teenage boy's cringey power fantasy.  The greatest example is when the super cute shy virgin hobgoblin girl with massive potential appears. Obviously, this anime waifu girl then instantly falls in love with the main character and becomes obsessed with him, who is a human shaped bug... Ya, alright. 

On top of this, the main character becomes ever more super special as the story goes on. It's to the point where the system not only blesses him with super cheats, but its constantly giving him and his minions incredibly pretentious and chunni titles, just so everyone knows how incredible they are for existing near this reality's protagonist. 

With that kind of special treatment anyone with near average intelligence could rise to godhood, which seriously devalues everything the protagonist does and makes him seem like a mindless author insert. 

Suggestions

The difference in treatment between the protagonist and everyone else needs toned down. It's ridiculous. Apparently, the system just dooms everyone else to mediocrity and stagnation while making reincarnated people gods. Even the other promethean candidates have been around for centuries or longer. We don't know much about them so far, but it will probably take the protagonist only a few years to reach their power level and given a century he could easily conquer the world, so obviously they aren't his match. 

The story would be better off if the protagonist earned his strongest cheats, such as limit breaker, instead of being handed them. For example, only after actually overcoming his limits by doing something like forcing his third evolution should he gain such a ridiculous ability. Skill shop is also a huge problem. How do others even get skills? Can they? Regardless, it needs toned down to be closer to what everyone else does. 

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pretty good so far I really wanna wait then just binge read alot but its hard with such a good story

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5star- world  building[author put lot of effort in stats ]

3star- author's choices after he takes human form. Initially, he had cautious character. He fights known battle (atleast from his perspective) but later on,   he become arrogant.

Fight with orc or investigation of humans despite knowing that there was a super-elite human. Talk with mistress to behavior after capture.

May be it is just me that I don't like character who just depends on luck.[and there are lot of places where he just gets by just being lucky]

Author has tendency to distort female character to his own fantasy.

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A very enjoyable read.

Glad to see a monster story that does not re-integrate the monster into human society. Some potentially interesting characters are introduced though besides the MC we don't know much about anyone else yet.I very much like that the MC is encountering some unique scenarios

and is not simply power leveling to god level but actually has to fight for his survival.

Sor far very promising and I'm eager to read more!

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