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My dream and purpose in life were being part of the incremental events that lead to the building of a space supercarrier!
My dream and purpose in life were being part of the incremental events that lead to the building of a space supercarrier!
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Our protagonist begins dead and talks to a god as is the usual in isekai, except he dreams big and mere cheats cannot satisfy him. He begins to negotiate with god who is not happy to hear his not so humble requests. All doesn't seem too well in the realm of the gods when the recruitment of our protagonist is interrupted to his ecstatic surprise. He is getting his dream granted by a less stingy god... or whatever that is.

Sent to a star system in the fringe of the galaxy, how will a artistically inclined nerd power the megastructure he always dreamt of? What will he do to the star system he finds himself in? What about the one high fantasy planet in orbit? What does his new body mean about his existence and conciousness? Is he still human? Does he care? Why am i talking to myself?

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This feels kinda awesome, a lot of ideas i've been having for writing are converging now into this one. I originally came up with this about an year or two ago, but only now i'm getting myself to actually write it past the 5 conceptual chapters i had done.
I finally feel like i know where this is going but there's always a surprise that come to mind when i'm writing, this is so cool.
In case you're wondering no, i did not decide to pretend the cover was a child's drawing halfway through failing to draw. It was closer to when i was finished.

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AdventureComedyFantasyIsekaiPsychologicalSci-fiSeinen
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Androids Army Building Artificial Intelligence Carefree Protagonist Crafting Demi-Humans Dragons Dungeons Evil Gods Fantasy World Gods Golems Hidden Abilities Hiding True Identity Interdimensional Travel Mythology Outer Space Poetry Protagonist Strong from the Start Strong to Stronger Underestimated Protagonist World Invasion
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      SovietWeeb
      Status: directive: implant
      May 31, 2019

      The first half or so is a bit rough I won't lie, But underneath that roughness is something pretty good. 

      The biggest issue I found with the story is that the Super-Carrier seems to have little to do with the rest of the story. I wasn't expecting lot's of usage of it cause it'd be a really short and not great story is the MC can just use Spaceships for any problem. But after the 2nd chapter or so, We haven't seen it once since then.

      The story has something that I love such as when sick people are picked up from a crappy life or almost death and is nursed back to health. I also am really just liking what's happening.

      There are only two other issues I have with it. That is, The writing structure is a bit weird and at times I feel like we aren't explained anything at all and then we sometimes get moments that feel like jump cuts. 

      The final issue is that I think this could've started as a normal isekai story and would've worked better. Would probably make it a little less confusing at the start also. The MC doesn't even really need to be an AI/Android. Could've just been gifted with an OP body with a supercomputer of a mind. 

      This is more of a personal taste also, But the MC, in my opinion, should've been female. Most of the story I would forget that the MC is actually male. The relationship with the little girl the MC is taking care of just seems it'd fit a ton better if the MC was a female. I can very much see the MC having a more big-sister/Mother type of relationship with the loli they're taking care of. I guess since the MC is an Android now that they can always be put into a female chassis. But wouldn't really sit well still. 

      I won't go into too much detail so I am not spoiling much. But I do think this is a pretty good story. 

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