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Average Words: | 3,289 |
Pages: | 156 |
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Nice story I recommend it.
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Absolutely adore this story ❤️
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It was as expected a really well written novel. I found this after binging Second Chance and I really liked it.
It shows the perspective of Erin, who, among many despairing gender bender protagonists, takes things with a much better mindset but it doesn't give the image of just casual acceptance as in poorly written works.
The dynamic of having vulnerable characters around Erin who all have their own problems and priorities was also very interesting to read.
If there is one thing I could say to the author that could be improved it is that the story feels rushed in some places. Don't get me wrong, I really like how you stick to the plot and wrap it up well instead of hemming and hawing while pumping out pointless chapters. But there were many places where regular life events could be added to give the story a more realistic touch. And one more reason why this story felt rushed is that I felt that Erin barely had time to process her own emotions and think a bit by herself. She was always running around doing things or dealing with people. The difference all this could have made is having at most 16 chapter book instead of 13 but with a more immersive read.
All in all I would rate this a 4.7 and good luck with your next work!
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