I love the story, but the grammar is currenlty barely readable unless you shut your brain off. Chapter 46 and 47 need completely re-done because they randomly jump all over the place and completely break up the flow of information and even the story.
You go from USA vs Russia with 3 fights, then USA vs Japan they do 1 fight, then Japan vs China, then USA vs Korea??? It makes no sense at all!!
Fix the grammar and I could give the story a 3 star. Fix those chapters and I could give the story a 4 star or even a 5...
I love the story, but the grammar is currenlty barely readable unless you shut your brain off. Chapter 46 and 47 need completely re-done because they randomly jump all over the place and completely break up the flow of information and even the story.
You go from USA vs Russia with 3 fights, then USA vs Japan they do 1 fight, then Japan vs China, then USA vs Korea??? It makes no sense at all!!
Fix the grammar and I could give the story a 3 star. Fix those chapters and I could give the story a 4 star or even a 5...
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