I'm bad at explaining stuff but here's my review (if you can call it that).

Story is a bit hard to follow because of the narration but there's some good story going on here.

Set in a futuristic setting (read the tags) with a mix of fantasy. Which was interesting. I started reading right after reading the synopsis so I didnt see the tags but I was expecting a fantasy medieval setting but instead it was sci-fi. But it works! And there's little plot holes so far, just that the narration makes it a bit hard to understand the world building at once.

Fast-paced action and progress in the story. No lolicon (thank goodness). A lot of unexplained things but I suppose those will be explained later?.

My only complaint is the narration, to be honest. It's not the grammar. The grammar is A-OK but I feel the narration has too many dialogues at some parts that the rest of what's going on is easily overlooked and by the end of the chapter you're like "wait what's going on again?" It's like the dialogues IS the narration that moves the story forward which can make it confusing. It's not that bad though, you can still understand what's going on.

A bit random but just wanted to say the thing about the barrier is confusing. I still dont understand what happened in that chapter to be honest (¯∇¯٥)

What I really like about this so far is honestly, the world in the story.

 The world feels real and every person in the story is 3D. They have a personality, a reason to be doing what they're doing, a purpose, a past. There's so much detail in the world, like the technology for example, author how much effort did you put into writing those?

looking forward to see more of this. Ty for posting. (O尸^ヮ^) o尸

I give this a 4 star btw. Idk why it wouldnt let me put star (ㆆ_ㆆ)

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