Etɔrnam, the assistant of the most powerful female swordsman at his time was cursed never to have a pleasant reincarnation.
That is, he would never reincarnate into a new life as a living being with new opportunities but would be stuck as an inanimate object for eternity, be it a stone or a house this curse simply didn't care.
Having a deep love for her assistant, the great swordsman provided her legendary moon sword as a vessel for his next life right after she had been killed in one of the greatest wars in history; the war of blood and turmoil.
She used the remaining part of her life as a source of power that would prevent her dear subordinate from ever breaking...
Now, war after war the sword is used and discarded. This went on for ages... until, the thirst for war was forgotten thus, leaving him in a deep slumber beneath the soil of the land used for the purposes of technology.
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- LitJan 14, 2021
- The weakJan 8, 2021
- Engraved words – Sek’s POVJan 6, 2021
- Saviours of the Great mass part 2Jan 5, 2021
- Saviours of the Great mass – Dela’s POVJan 4, 2021
- Sand! … And a town.Jan 2, 2021
- Reduced to rubbleJan 1, 2021
- Living RocksDec 31, 2020
- Unclear – Sek’s POVDec 30, 2020
- Break and muteDec 20, 2020
- Snake – Dela’s POVDec 18, 2020
- The Wolf TamerDec 18, 2020
- ScarletDec 17, 2020
- Planetary distinctionDec 17, 2020
- EscapeDec 15, 2020
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I'm bad at explaining stuff but here's my review (if you can call it that).
Story is a bit hard to follow because of the narration but there's some good story going on here.
Set in a futuristic setting (read the tags) with a mix of fantasy. Which was interesting. I started reading right after reading the synopsis so I didnt see the tags but I was expecting a fantasy medieval setting but instead it was sci-fi. But it works! And there's little plot holes so far, just that the narration makes it a bit hard to understand the world building at once.
Fast-paced action and progress in the story. No lolicon (thank goodness). A lot of unexplained things but I suppose those will be explained later?.
My only complaint is the narration, to be honest. It's not the grammar. The grammar is A-OK but I feel the narration has too many dialogues at some parts that the rest of what's going on is easily overlooked and by the end of the chapter you're like "wait what's going on again?" It's like the dialogues IS the narration that moves the story forward which can make it confusing. It's not that bad though, you can still understand what's going on.
A bit random but just wanted to say the thing about the barrier is confusing. I still dont understand what happened in that chapter to be honest (¯∇¯٥)
all I understood was. Sek needed to use a talisman (which I think is supposed to be ancient thing) and then he chant then idk what happened then sword fell unconscious and the girl is in a coma??? Help XD
What I really like about this so far is honestly, the world in the story.
The world feels real and every person in the story is 3D. They have a personality, a reason to be doing what they're doing, a purpose, a past. There's so much detail in the world, like the technology for example, author how much effort did you put into writing those?
but then again narration makes it a bit hard to understand :'D more imagery could help (and/or explanation on how/for what purpose those things work (like the functions.)
looking forward to see more of this. Ty for posting. (O尸^ヮ^) o尸
I give this a 4 star btw. Idk why it wouldnt let me put star (ㆆ_ㆆ)
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