Pretty solid story with a system I find extremely interesing, the character development so far is good but I find a lack of long lasting one friend or something (not an objetc), maybe beacuse the novels is still at the start, idk.

The world built is the unique aspect of this storie and the principal aspect of what makes it interesting.

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DurinTorde

Status: 17. personal shrine trial

Feb 18, 2021

Read everything so far, its a very interesting concept, and I love it so far.

Keep up the good work, I know I follow this series

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rays

Status: c174

Sep 20, 2021

This is a good story. It has nice pacing and good characters. But has a giant problem witch is the fact that MC is a puppet.

In this world, mind control is so easy that anyone with some authority can use it with no repercussions.

Like that isn't enough, everyone lies to MC in some way through the story. 'But for some reason', MC never notices them.

There are some problems with inconsistancies I would claim but MC get his information from people around him, and they are liars and/or mind controlled.

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AlohNoah

Status: c210

Sep 9, 2021

I've been reading this story pretty much every day and I decided to write a review, that does it justice. (At least I tried to) Please excuse any mistakes or weirdly written sentensces, as I'm not a native speaker. Also I tried to keep it as spoiler-free as possible.

First off all, thank you for brightening up my day with your amazing story, Author.

"Leveling up the World" is the entrhalling, no, the unpudownable story about the journey a boy named Dallion, who finds himself transported to another world. Its a breath of fresh air in a genre dominated by marysueesque characters facing their adversaries trough the means of realitybending, unstoppable powers and bad plot.

I think part of what makes this story so great is how lifelike and realistic its protagonist is portrayed. He honestly feels just like a real human being. How so? Well, he's not perfect. He's reckless and overconfident, dumb and insecure. I enjoy watching him grow and develop on his adventures. I love that he's not just another perfect hero. I love taht he's not an edgy cringelord. He's just like you and me. Thats what makes him as a character so damn enjoyable.

Another part of what makes this story so damn great are the system and the world, setting the scene for Dallions journey of growth. They're intruing and creative. I feel like everything is so carefully crafted and its concepts are full of inruiging und creative ideas. I love the originallity. I love the small nuances of classic fantasy being mixed with a multitude of new creative ideas. I love the courage of deviating from the norm of the age-old "Hero needs to save the world from demonlord" or the "let's just make everything a waifu" stories. It has that spark that just resonates with me.

The next big thing on my list is the pacing, which in my opinion just hits that sweet spot. The flow of the story is just right to give you that feeling of progression whithout skipping ahead or boring you out.

Last but not least is the writing. Another job well done. While I've already touched upon it before, it deserves it's own paragraph.

While we're slowly being fed bits and pieces of lore, Dallion is just out there growing accustomed this new world he's been thrown into. It really makes you emphasize with him. In a sense we're like Dallion: Opening a book, not knowig whats awaits us. I feel like thats why its so easy to indefy yourself with him. We're seeing the world trough Dallions point of view, exploring and discovering the world trough his senses. It feels as foreign to us as it does to him. Thats what makes you grow alongside him on this journey unraveling this foreign world. But thats where I'll stop. Why don't you take a look yourself?

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rz2272

Status: c44

Jun 24, 2021

Brilliant premise, an interesting level-up/power up system, nice worldbuilding, and a pretty good main character.

The way the MC gets stronger is interesting, and you can actually feel the tension you normally wouldn't when reading op MC isekai. It's a good read for litrpg fans.

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