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Needs Improvement. The story progresses a little slowly, so the readers will need to be a bit patient. The plot isn't half bad and underneath the bland portrayal, there are definitely glimpses of creativity. The grammar and punctuation may need some work but it does not hinder one's visual delight. The narration-type story telling is probably not for me though. Perhaps if the story was in 3rd Person, but with the 1st Person perspective, it is only revealing its flaws (for now). With some tweaking though, I believe the story will improve drastically. The best way is to show and not tell. Best of Luck!
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A cute, laid back story about the life of little Ori, it's basically a slice of life dealing with the daily events that Ori finds herself in, from birthdays to meeting new friends to other mundane things that a little girl would find herself in.
The story itself is simple and a good way for you to relax and have some fluff in your life, I would recommend it if you're searching for a light, simple slice of life to relax to, and who knows even if you're not you might like it, we all need some fluff in out lives.
At the end I wanna thank the author for giving us this story~~
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