The first chapter of the lacks descriptiveness about how he changed his current form and how he reincarnated.
The grammar is good but it needs more details or a side character signaling how and tells the reader some or most of how, he changes after his reincarnation.
I would have added 4 stars but no conversations or details was added in.
The first chapter of the lacks descriptiveness about how he changed his current form and how he reincarnated.
The grammar is good but it needs more details or a side character signaling how and tells the reader some or most of how, he changes after his reincarnation.
I would have added 4 stars but no conversations or details was added in.
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