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Word Count: | 2,896 |
Average Words: | 579 |
Pages: | 11 |
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The first chapter of the lacks descriptiveness about how he changed his current form and how he reincarnated.
The grammar is good but it needs more details or a side character signaling how and tells the reader some or most of how, he changes after his reincarnation.
I would have added 4 stars but no conversations or details was added in.
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