All around the continent, conversations goes like this…
The Hero’s party
“Woah! Where did you get that sword?”
“I purchase it from that place.”
A group of birdmen
“I heard that place have a Wing Wash service that can increase our speed in the sky.”
“You’re also headed there?”
A group of green goblins
“Since we have a long break, where can we go for our vacation.”
“That place sounds good. Maybe I’ll be lucky to see Young Boss and confess to her.”
“Haha, go ahead if you don’t mind being beaten up and blacklisted in that place.”
Scholars say that every citizen in their city has given 'that place' at least one gold coin. They estimate that 70% of the whole continent’s economy is somehow related to 'that place’s name'. How did this happen they ask…? It is because of the Boss Merchant who only provides them with only the best products and services one can imagine.
4.5 / 5
It feels like a great story should.
It advances at the correct pace, it delivers your expectations at due time, the character develop at the right pace, along with the world building, the discoveries, the relationships and the comedy.
This story feels great because you don’t have to force yourself to read a paragraph or more full of any of those things straight, the story is dinamic. Things that have to be explained are still explained, but it doesn’t reek of a lot of backstory that you have to memorize before you start enjoying the story, the plot, character development, and world building start at the beginning.
The story is already enjoyable at its fullest since the begging as a good story, and as you read more it turns into a great story, thanks to it’s fluidity, character development and the feelings it transmits.
Overall, it has great potential to become a really good story, maybe the only flaw could be that at times it feels too good, as if the novel was feeling smug by your thoughts, but that is only a feeling I get and maybe, not even a bad point.
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