It advances at the correct pace, it delivers your expectations at due time, the character develop at the right pace, along with the world building, the discoveries, the relationships and the comedy.
This story feels great because you don’t have to force yourself to read a paragraph or more full of any of those things straight, the story is dinamic. Things that have to be explained are still explained, but it doesn’t reek of a lot of backstory that you have to memorize before you start enjoying the story, the plot, character development, and world building start at the beginning.
The story is already enjoyable at its fullest since the begging as a good story, and as you read more it turns into a great story, thanks to it’s fluidity, character development and the feelings it transmits.
Overall, it has great potential to become a really good story, maybe the only flaw could be that at times it feels too good, as if the novel was feeling smug by your thoughts, but that is only a feeling I get and maybe, not even a bad point.
4.5 / 5
It feels like a great story should.
It advances at the correct pace, it delivers your expectations at due time, the character develop at the right pace, along with the world building, the discoveries, the relationships and the comedy.
This story feels great because you don’t have to force yourself to read a paragraph or more full of any of those things straight, the story is dinamic. Things that have to be explained are still explained, but it doesn’t reek of a lot of backstory that you have to memorize before you start enjoying the story, the plot, character development, and world building start at the beginning.
The story is already enjoyable at its fullest since the begging as a good story, and as you read more it turns into a great story, thanks to it’s fluidity, character development and the feelings it transmits.
Overall, it has great potential to become a really good story, maybe the only flaw could be that at times it feels too good, as if the novel was feeling smug by your thoughts, but that is only a feeling I get and maybe, not even a bad point.
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