I have rather enjoyed the start of this story and am looking forwards to more. Here is why:
1: Grammar and spelling so far has been quite good with both word choice and sentence flow being quite natural and without any issues that I noticed.
2. Characters and setting are interesting. The characters have reasonable motivations and have meshed rather well with their dialogue and interactions being both realistic, and super cute. World itself has some good ideas that are being fleshed out without too large or dense exposition. Gladly in my case the litrpg elements are pretty light since I find a lot of litrpgs to put way too much focus on them.
3. The smut is s*xy and well written, I rather like how both parties are holding back letting it build in a slower manner, and the hints of romance so far are quite nice.
Generally speaking I hope the author continues writing so I can see what our heroines have for us in the future.
Nice. I like the idea of integrating the smut elements with game mechanics, but it's rare for me to find a fic that does it well like it's done here where I can
There's a fair bit of drama, but it feels like it comes from characters being complicated and nuanced more than from contrivance/cliche/shallowness/dumbness, at least enough so that the characters are still likeable.
I noticed that the smut here takes its time to ramp up, like they start with handjobs and seem to slowly build up/escalate over the course of the story, but I'd consider that worth it for having them be so character driven, and beside the scenes are still pretty hot with how well they're written.
I started reading this because it was recommended by the Author of Reborn From The Cosmos about 6 months ago. Author, I hope you continue this someday because it's really great! You've got a great handle on how to handle erotica with story and keep it from devolving into light novel-style inane smut.
Life at Tenet Delving Academy isn’t easy in the best of cases. It’s a life filled with scheming classmates, brutal competitions, and an ever-changing, ever-deadly dungeon.
And Natalie?
Natalie’s got all that to deal with and more. G
When people die, where do they end up to?
I don’t know about anyone else, but when I died, I arrived at the strangest Heaven of all times. And I got a chance to reincarnate with all of my memories!
Jackpot!
If you look awa
Immortality is an illusion.
Ianna Kovac’s first moments of a new life after her own uneventful one comes to an end are marked with fear, pain, and yet another death. Faced by the guardian of an ancient tomb she experiences firsthand the hor
Nightmare Fantasy Online.
The newest entry of the mega game corporation “Terra Sol AS” line of world-changing games and a hot new member of the VRMMO-genre.
And now, a young girl tired of reality wishes to obtain a new life
Endrin Academy is for the elite magic wielders of the world, not for someone like Elaina Weaver, born in a small village with no knowledge of magic or nobility, but by some strange twist of fate she’s found herself there. Her commoner birth
I have rather enjoyed the start of this story and am looking forwards to more. Here is why:
1: Grammar and spelling so far has been quite good with both word choice and sentence flow being quite natural and without any issues that I noticed.
2. Characters and setting are interesting. The characters have reasonable motivations and have meshed rather well with their dialogue and interactions being both realistic, and super cute. World itself has some good ideas that are being fleshed out without too large or dense exposition. Gladly in my case the litrpg elements are pretty light since I find a lot of litrpgs to put way too much focus on them.
3. The smut is s*xy and well written, I rather like how both parties are holding back letting it build in a slower manner, and the hints of romance so far are quite nice.
Generally speaking I hope the author continues writing so I can see what our heroines have for us in the future.
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Great novel, 10/10. Perfect grammar, great vocabulary. The characters are realistic, and the smut doesn’t feel forced. Would definitely recommend.
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Nice. I like the idea of integrating the smut elements with game mechanics, but it's rare for me to find a fic that does it well like it's done here where I can
There's a fair bit of drama, but it feels like it comes from characters being complicated and nuanced more than from contrivance/cliche/shallowness/dumbness, at least enough so that the characters are still likeable.
I noticed that the smut here takes its time to ramp up, like they start with handjobs and seem to slowly build up/escalate over the course of the story, but I'd consider that worth it for having them be so character driven, and beside the scenes are still pretty hot with how well they're written.
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I started reading this because it was recommended by the Author of Reborn From The Cosmos about 6 months ago. Author, I hope you continue this someday because it's really great! You've got a great handle on how to handle erotica with story and keep it from devolving into light novel-style inane smut.
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