Excellent story, especially considering that it's her first.
The characters are interesting, the concept behind the main characters is really interesting, and the actual dialogue and scenes are very good.
This story sat in my to-read for longer than it should have, partly because of the quote at the beginning of the description - I thought it was going be more serious, but it's relatively lighthearted (so far) and just excellent.
If I had to come up with a complaint, it's that the plot pacing feels a tiny bit slow, but it's super minor. Things are still happening in the plot, and I like the characters enough that I was never actually disappointed by the pacing.
Everyone has a bit of magic in them, even on regular old Earth. But it’s difficult to find that power when you can’t find yourself.
Erick is just a normal dude who is definitely, positively, probably not transgender (no matter how en
VOW, Veil Of Worlds. Merely another game in the industry, just that it’s the most advanced technologically, one that gives you much more freedom than any other. That’s the mindset a seemingly ordinary student takes when logging in for
Aurora was just your average totally-not-super-dense-closet-lesbian high school girl who loved to hang out with her friends. Especially with her childhood friend, and cuddle-buddy extraordinaire, Corelia. However, one night after a long study sess
Lourianne Tome is a mildly talented, underachieving, slightly lecherous summoner who wants nothing more than to live a simple life away from her father’s expectations. Those dreams are waylaid when a madman knocks her carriage off the road a
Lexi has a terrifying encounter while in an abandoned asylum… She’s strangely compelled to investigate and discovers a cute monster.
Thanks to my editor: BlueTinge, who works very hard to keep me in line.
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Excellent story, especially considering that it's her first.
The characters are interesting, the concept behind the main characters is really interesting, and the actual dialogue and scenes are very good.
This story sat in my to-read for longer than it should have, partly because of the quote at the beginning of the description - I thought it was going be more serious, but it's relatively lighthearted (so far) and just excellent.
If I had to come up with a complaint, it's that the plot pacing feels a tiny bit slow, but it's super minor. Things are still happening in the plot, and I like the characters enough that I was never actually disappointed by the pacing.
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