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A lot of grammar mistakes especially with tenses and sometimes with pronouns. So it kinda needs an editor or something.
But if you can get over the small mistakes I recommend it, the story is rly good.
The main focus is not the old circle (Harry, Hermione, Ron) but a new MC with his own back story and family situation. The MC changes the story, but tries to keep the changes to the minimal, most of the original story is still the same and the MC is trying to keep it that way. The original plot sometimes happens in the background and sometimes its in the forefront because of the changes made by the MC.
I love the character development of the MC, he goes from a loner to a guy with friends then a murder machine, a killer without any remorse, then a broken man with blood on his hands and then a boyfriend with huge trauma.
The relationship between the MC and FMC is a slow burn, but there is a reason for it, they eventually get together.
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It was interesting to read, but then the main character became to obsessed with revenge.
the main character found out about his birth fathers blood oath to kill all of the death eaters, and became obsessed with completing it, because his father is "indisposed". He is dragging his friends along with the revenge, and is allowing voldeshorts to be revived so that he can f**k with him for revenge.
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