Is he a hero for real? He was fighting against the apocalypse, even the final boss. Then, in the new world he gets beaten up from a couple of girls that have experienced, at most, couple of gangs's fights...

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Ornyx

Status: chapter 2.3

Nov 19, 2022

I'm just going to say it if you are here for a story with a consistent main character, this is not it. It's evident that this story is just smut with an excellent premise, but the main character flips flops between being assertive or submissive its kinda jarring. One moment, he doesn't take flak from anyone, and the next, he cannot do anything to help himself or others. Example

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In the First Chapter set, he meets a girl called Farans, who is a villain that generates forcefields. She tries to have s*x with the main character by fingering his asshole, which he doesn't like, which ruins his mood, so he is not into it. She tries to continue, but he says no; she tries anyway and gets punched. This is what I thought shows that Nick is very strong-willed. In the Second Set of chapters, where he has to lick the pu**y of the principal to get out of trouble which he does because he fears his new "mom" will kill herself if he doesn't or rape him again. Which doesn't make sense, considering that she told him not the have s*x anymore.

Another example is also in the second set of chapters of what I have read when he cannot stop a girl from getting curb stomped by her bullies and has to compromise to save her when he, a hero, could do something.

What I'm trying to say is that for a hero who was able to survive long enough to fight the final boss, he doesn't really do a good job of being a hero or even being a male from a patriarchy that was transported into a matriarchal world when it matters

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The novel becomes hard to read because we are seeing the world through the lens of the main character and his changing of personalities on the fly when the story demands it in order, from what I can tell, to set up s*x scenes.

Other than that, the smut is great and well-written, and the story premise is really well executed, especially since it's really nice to see the reverse of common phrases, which are a joy to read.

Also, it's hard to tell if the girls in the new reality girls are as strong as the guys in the old one because sometimes he one punches people, and other times he just isn't able to do anything.

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dosendieter

Status: chapter 3.1

Dec 3, 2022

It's actually a really nice novel and you get what the tags promise. People complaining don't get the context, that he can't simply use his super power because they are cursed. It's a really good dark fantasy, please keep going author :)

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