It's not good.

I read the first chapter in earnest, but there are too many errors to understand it. After the first chapter, I have no idea what the main character's goals, motivations, or interests are other than that he's some special rich kid in a "fake town".

I'd like to give additional commentary on the story, but I literally cannot tell what's going on other than the main character had some out of body experience and is now late to school. There are details that are vaguely descriptive, but none of it helps paint a solid picture anywhere.

Don't read this.

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