Interesting, very similar initial world building to the Author’s POV on Webnovel but with enough twists and turns to be majorly unique. So far, 9/10 world building; 8/10 in language; 8/10 character development but mostly due to the limited content currently released; 10/10 for potential.

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SaucyHug

Status: chapter 20: prehistory in a modern...

Feb 10, 2023

The writing style is good, the plot is good. Characters are interesting enough.

The author's self confidence is low judging by the ratings and comments. I wish the updates were a bit more frequent but other then that its a good read if you like transmigration stories.

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ArchmageOfTerror

Status: chapter 22

Feb 12, 2023

Keep it up author san

This story is good I would say

And release more Chapters lol

As I have already completed all of them

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TheRaith

Status: volume 2: prologue

Jul 12, 2024

Basically it's carried by the premise. If you've read something like The Novel's Extra it like that but without the dialogue, without the decisive MC, and without any noticeable character traits. The characters are all pretty bland without much difference between them. The writing is around maybe middle school level quality in terms of grammar. There's little to no thought given to how dialogue would sound out loud, scatterbrained fight sequences with lots of overexplaining mid-fight, and sporadic pacing with some events taking multiple chapters when they should finish in maybe two max. Basically, read it if you're bored since it's coherent, but don't expect anything amazing.

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markos

Status: chapter 34: the forbidden potion

Jun 27, 2023

Originally thought this was a translation in the quality. But well didn't find any raws...

Nothing too original, but the (Ray) teacher isn't being guided to romance with the students, the power system is "not yet" suffering from power creep.

Doesn't have a bunch of convenient misunderstandings shielding him. MC is relatable and avoids being stupid or naive. The plot tries to breathe new life into the formula of KR fantasy stories.

Has his priorities straight... his survival first. Ray has potential but isn't OP (yet?) so for now it's good. Tackle challenges with his strength which is currently prep work.

Please try and support the author (in constructive ways).

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