Extremely slow-paced, most of the series is just MC having s*x with a girl who barely knows him, somehow they fall in deeeeep love, and essentially every second chapter has them kissing, and every third chapter has a s*x scene.

It gets old really fast, especially when the series is extremely slow f**king paced there is barely anything happening (when u add the fact the MC is basically almost op with very few potential opponents you realize this is just a slice of life novel of a couple having sez) there's only 2 fleshed out characters, and one of them heavily revolves around having MC around.

The grammar is good, very readable, the story not so much, there isn't much going on besides talking about s*x and love. 

Nothing against people who like smut but this guy is clearly trying to sell his fiction to a certain audience for a certain reason. 

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It’s good and has an interesting premise but there’s so many s*x scenes! Why isn’t this tagged as smut! 54 chapters in and all they’ve done is have s*x 

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Don't start reading this story!

It is well written and the concept is a bit trope filled, but is immersive. The sentence structure is good and the grammar is fine. The story flows well and is fun to join in on the authors self insert story. So why shouldn't you read it? 

This story is all promise and no delivery. 150 chapters in and no action. The MC wins the everlasting love of his girl with zero effort. Male heros from the comics are reduced to creeps, simps, or psychos. No meaningful conflict occurs to challenge the MC. There was literally one chapter of significant fighting and that was just a flex to show how awesomely OP the MC is. He holds back the entire fight, which everyone can somehow tell, while still winning the mindless adoration of a second powerful female character from the comics. The author drops enough nuggets about villains to make you feel like eventually an epic fight will occur but doesn't. The MC grows in power and prepares for the battles that never materialize. 

This novel is a power fantasy with no battles. It reads more like an erotic novel made a baby with Twilight then cut out everything but the angst and s*x. The side characters are all bland, boring, and only get pov time in order to gush about the amazingly wonderful MC. Hundreds of words written about how terrifying his eyes are and how he exudes calm manliness. One of the most powerful characters in MC is reduced to a bubbly airhead that loves to shop, gossip, and get taken by her soul mate savior.

There were parts that had real promise. I won't mention specifics but the MC stumbles on a possible reason for his GF's trouble in the comics and how her story goes "dark". Unfortunately this was used as a plot device to hook the MC up instead of in any meaningful way.

The MC has some douche nozzle world view that makes no sense except as justification to do nothing and help no one. The author clearly aims to make him a neutral character, neither good nor bad, but only manages to make him boring and self centered. Large parts of the story are pointless, as the MC doesn't really do anything except watch another hero's story unfold while philosophizing about a weird sociopathic take on karma. 

Don't read this unless it gets a serious rewrite or you are just in it for the adult scenes. 

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This story is honestly a breath of fresh air, The story flows well and it is well written. One thing to note is that the story seems romance heavy, at least 60% of it is romance and if that turns you off then I dont recommend this for a read. One other thing of note is that I have never read of a MC putting so much thought into a singular power, its amazing and makes this read worth it all on its own. Other than that it should be noted that the protagonist is quite strong and is honestly smart compared to other protagonists I have read about, to the level of being overpowered. However his overpoweredness is somewhat understandable later on, all in all it is a great read and I highly recommend.

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It's perfect ? I like the chemistry between jean and Elijah and I'm looking forward to seeing more of their love life good job to you mister author.

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Tl;dr: A very self-indulgent fic with an incredibly rushed romance and a spineless MC even with all the power he possesses.

This story had promise. It really did. Then it got to when the MC and Jean somehow fell in love with each other even though they've only known each other for a day. I still read through it, hoping to find some more excitement, only to find some mushy romance about how "dreamy" and "gorgeous" the MC's eyes are and also a lot of smut. Like, 50-60% of the fic after them moving out of the mansion is them having s*x or some cloying display of their incredibly rushed romance. And somehow, everyone just immediately accepts him getting with the hottest and most powerful girl in their group in an incredibly short period of time as if it was a normal thing to happen? Can this get any more self-indulgent?

Then there are the issues with the MC himself. What a f**king asshole. The guy yearns freedom and is so devoted to seeking that he lets innocent people die in front of him because if he saved them, it somehow means he has the responsibility to save everyone he can. He doesn't want to save or fight anyone because he doesn't want to be burdened by karma. That would be reasonable and would fit his ambition of attaining true freedom, if it weren't for the fact that he f**king shackled himself to a girl he somehow bonded with almost at first sight, as if it was a sh*tty soul-bond fic, and now has to fight against a foe that the girl herself could handle, but that the MC insisted on handling himself because of his f**king pride. What a hypocrite. He acts like he's above it all, as if he's an immortal looking down on peasants, but infringe on his personal interests and he suddenly finds himself wanting to interfere with the mortal world. I'd even go as far as to day that he's spineless because he clearly doesn't regard his ambition all that highly if he's willing to shackle himself just so he can eat that pu**y. Xianxia protagonists are assholes of a really high degree, but even they have the resolution to follow through their goals even if it means abandoning who and what they love. Not to mention, him choosing to not save people he definitely could have saved because he doesn't want to get burdened by responsibility and karma is f**king stupid when you think about what he's been working hard for all this time. He's supposed to want absolute freedom, meaning he should choose to do whatever he wants and not be shackled by whatever higher being or concept that decides what should happen. This is entirely antithetical to his supposedly deepest desire, and is another reason to call him spineless. I get that this is supposed to portray him as a neutral player, but all it really did was make him look like an absolute sociopath who sees human life that isn't his close ones as having less worth than a blade of grass.

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This story feels like a desperate cry for love and understanding. I'm going to liken it to an adult fairy tale. 

What is a fairy tale? A fairy tale is often intended for children, and tends to feature fanciful and wondrous characters such as elves, goblins, wizards, and fairies. These tales are often characterized by magical elements and imaginative settings. They can convey moral lessons or entertain with fantastical adventures.

In this adult-oriented fairy-tale story, the MC is known, without being known, and usually understood, as an unspoken rule. Frankly, I tend to like a good fairy tale story. This story, unfortunately, isn't that good. It feels decent, but good? Not really... Makes me feel kinda sad actually. 

Everyone who meets our MC just seems to understand him. They can somehow see or feel his "Will", and recognize it. Usually through his eyes, and his simple actions. Later, others somehow understand our MC, because reality itself communicates his "Will" to others. It's like the Author, and the MC, are screaming at me, "Can't you see me?!", "Don't you understand?!"...

There is very little story behind this constant barrage of selfish desire. Now, there is nothing wrong with desiring freedom, or love and understanding, or anything, really. People are going to want what they want, and I'm going to do the same...

It's actually one of my biggest problems with this story. While this story's greatest strength is its' desire for personal love and understanding... I can't help but feel like it's raining on me. I usually like the rain, but I also tend to prefer it from a sheltered and cozy position inside.

There is a story here. It's just awash in its' own emotional needs and desire for a real and meaningful connection. At this point, I'm having trouble seeing past the inherent desire, and can't seem to connect myself with this fairy tale anymore. There's a reason fairy tales are usually short? I don't feel like indulging in this fairy-tale story anymore. It's doesn't feel substantial, and appears to hold no further joy for me. 

Is this a good review? I don't know. Do I feel like this was a fair assessment? Absolutely. Over 100 chapters in, and our MC has fallen deeply in love with a woman, gained a substantial amount of power, and... well that's kinda it? There's some philosophical stuff tossed in there... some very opinionated philosophical stuff, at that. 

When others have stated that this story is like a romance, or a smut, but also a slice of life... I kind of have to agree. There's a lot of desire in this story, and as such most of the interaction in this story defaults to, "I love this person very much, and so I have trouble keeping my hands off them.", or to, "I feel the urge to protect my love from anyone that could harm them.", or even, "I will be 'free' at all costs."...

It's just... full of desire for personal love, to be understood personally, and to be free to do anything. The story cries out its need (s) constantly. It's opinionated, messy, and the story just can't seem to get away from its own needy internal monologue. 

The MC is so full of his "Will", that everyone just seems to give him what he wants. It's an adult fairy tale. A fantasy... and though I probably won't continue to read for much longer, I can't seem to give this story a lower rating. Because, while it may be a bit empty for me, it was still a story, and not complete garbage. Barely average, but average all the same. Still, it needs more work to be great, or sometimes, even good. 

Till next Time! -Ditz

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Was a good story with a good character and the MCU characters were well written, not coming off as cringe.

Until the s*xual scenes happened. Not only were they disturbing but also felt greatly out of place.

MC barley met someone and less than 24 hours they are already doing it out of mutual attraction. Keep in mind its supposedly 17 year old teens.

Professor Xavier's school was also deranged and portrayed, or implied to be portrayed, as a f-ck nest for all the horny teens.

Last one is personal preference, but disliked the exposure of homos*xuality of other characters that felt uneeded for the story and its plot. Just like the overly weird s*x scenes that, quite frankly, felt as if written by a horny teen.

The story degenerate and derailed.

Edit: curse me. Ch47 and its just Nothing but s*x scene after s*x scene. Barely any plot progression at all. Its just s*x scene after s*x scene. I hope an amateur writer and not someone depraved leaking their thoughts

Edit: 137. The srory is terrible. Barely any progress. MC doesn't help anybody even if there are no negative consequence such as 

The MC flips into an edgelord emo kid when soe talks wrongly to his GF and nearly kills them.

The story is nothing but side characters explaining at the MC terrifying power, which isn't much, the MC having endless inner monologues to justify his inaction to do anything, and a sh*t ton of s*x scenes that are essentially nothing but the same scene written over and over and repeated from both povs every time.

137 chapters could of plot be written in 30 at most and nothing would have been lost.

The story is bland. The MC is without goal in practice, he has no stable character personality, no plot progression of any meaning happens, and to top it all the overly cringe dialogue of how much the duo love each other and how much they f**k despite being only 17 is utter cringe and feels self insert.

You know the brainless xianxia where everyone praises the MC at the slightest fart as if he revealed the dao? This is it but worse because its set in the MCU with the MC doing nothing with his knowledge to change or gain things.

Bland event then inner monologue then 2 chapter same s*x scene and confessing their love then MC be praised for his power then repeat.

Why did I read so much? Because im the fool wastinf his time repeating the same thing and expecting a different outcome. 0/5

The author is too scared, inexperienced, or horny to write anything good besides a bland story if s*x scenes with the background image being that of MCU.

Edit: 180. Meh. 2/5 it has potential and the author shows willingness to write quality or at least improve it but the story still suffers from extreme padding with nothing but repeated s*x scene and endless love professions.

This story would have easily gotten a 4/5 out of me if the synopsis (at the time of writing) stated this as a romance slice of life that happens to be set in the MCU. Would have read with another mindset. The synopsis and title here are too grandiose for ehat eas deliverred in 180chapters.

Most of the chapters are telling and not showing about the MC greatness or about the love between the main duo.

Still, ill give it a 2/5 and hope the author rewrites this from the ground up while looking at all comments, even the angry ones, as the story can be fun to read and always left me wanting craving for it to do things better.

(Practical Review: 180chaps. Conflicts number less than 5 and with what feels like totally the wrong factions due to the writing quality. Most chapters are filler content of same s*x scene and telling us how much they love each other. Barely any significant plot progress that isnt pure slice of life)

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In the beginning its good but the whole premise which seems cool in the beginning just kinda drags the story down as you proceed.  His need for freedom is so flawed but is countered by his ability to make women fall in love with him at a glance. You can only go so far with a story built on meaningless intimacy and s*x scenes to sustain the plot. Freedom is an illusion and this stories flaws prove it. 

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The story was good, nice plot, MC too emotionally portrayed and too many romance scenes and s*x scenes..

But when is it returning? Stopped right on a cliff ?

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