So far it has an interesting story and a MC that is enjoyable, but as of right now the writing can be very hard to follow. The prologue chapter is very difficult to understand and while it does get better immediately afterwards it retains a problem with gendering/pronouns that makes it confusing as to who is doing what. For example there are times where within a single paragraph the MC will be referred to as both he and she while occasionally slipping into using me/my. I really enjoy this story but it is a difficult read
Synopsis:
Anom, the infamous thief lord, is unexpectedly contacted for a new job: stealing a mysterious stone from a newly-appeared otherworldly island. Intrigued by the challenge, he accepts the proposal and ventures to the island, which h
A young farmer’s son, Oscar, is content with living a peaceful life, but by fate’s whim, he is found to have the potential to become something greater, an Exalt. A special class of humans who perform miraculous feats and lord over othe
This is my first attempt at writing, please be gentle with it. I have very little idea where the story will go or how the characters will develop but goddamn it I will try my best to make it somewhat entertaining. Given the free writing style I us
Lyon, a young man from the village must leave the countryside in search of a medicine that can cure his elder sister who has suffered from an incurable disease.
With careful preparation, Lyon can get out of the countryside so that he can g
150 years after the event known as “Primal Dawn,” Peter finds himself starting life by joining the ranks of ‘tamers’. Tamers occupy the role which adventurers once took on, long, long ago. Fighting the ever looming threat k
So far it has an interesting story and a MC that is enjoyable, but as of right now the writing can be very hard to follow. The prologue chapter is very difficult to understand and while it does get better immediately afterwards it retains a problem with gendering/pronouns that makes it confusing as to who is doing what. For example there are times where within a single paragraph the MC will be referred to as both he and she while occasionally slipping into using me/my. I really enjoy this story but it is a difficult read
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