I really wanted to like this story but, it reads like someone wrote it in 1 language then translated it using google and edited the result to be sort of readable.

The tenses are not good, using present when it should be past and the same in reverse.

Pronoun's are often wrong. Seems to happen with line's like "she talked to him" becomes "she talked to her".

There's a lot of wrong words as well, in the from of words that are somewhat related to what you actually want, like using orbiting instead of floating.

Finally there are a lot of lines and paragraphs that make no sense at all, you can somewhat tell what the authors trying to say but you spend far too much time on deciphering the story.

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Edit: The writing quality now has change. There's no mistakes anymore, and were easy to read. Idk about the earlier chapters, hasn't checked. Hope author would edit them.

But anyway, with the writing quality checked from the list, it worth 5 star.

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the recent chapters doens't have a lot of grammar mistakes and for people that keep complaining, understand that the author doens't speak english fluent and because of that he put it in google translator after writing it, he could pretty much write it in his original language and we would be the ones translating if we really wanted to read

now about the novel, its really good in my opinion and like any other novel that I really liked and gave a 5 star, I will say that if you have any questions about it until the chapter that this review is saying I will awnser it, you can ask in my profile or inbox

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At first I thought it would be like other marvel fanfics. But the setting and MC change everything. So the story takes place in the 90s. The MC has the powers of the protagonist of Strike the Blood. I love it that the author chose him as template, because the powers are op but not ridiculously. Also in the anime they don't explore or explain the powers much. The protagonist from the anime only uses one for every situation.

So, I hope the author explores that side and I hope the harem part is well written.

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I really like the novel. Good job! Hope to read more.

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I really like the story, the relationships are good the family doesn't fall into the background. I'm finding myself waiting and excited for the next chap 

Good job author 👍

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I tried reading this many times but because of the quality of the early chapters I struggled a lot. Frustration about the quality of the translation work made it exceptionally hard to continue reading.

Other reviews said that around chapter 70 the quality had improved a lot and that is true, I saw a marked decrease in errors starting at chapter 40 and quickly improving chapter by chapter. Now at chapter 122/218 I am very happy I struggled through those early chapters. I am greatly enjoying the novel at this point. 

I suggest that if you are interested in the premise of the novel, that you try to read it and see what you think and if you like me struggle with the errors or the author has not gone back to edit them that you skimm the first 35-40 chapters so you get the broad strokes about what is going on and picking up reading it like normal after that point. 

I must stress the point that I really really  enjoy the story at the point I am at and I hope you do too!

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So, about this novel – it's kind of average. The plot moves pretty slow, heavy on the whole 'Slice of Life' thing, which might not click with everyone. The main character's moments with his romantic interests? Well, they feel a bit forced and keep hitting the same beats without that natural flow.

I stuck with it for 120 chapters, and yeah, the author's writing gets better along the way, but it doesn't quite hit the 'Good' mark. If you're in need of a time-filler and want something to binge, this novel could work. But if you're aiming for a more gripping read, you might want to skip this one.

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Let's get rid of the biggest hurdle to this story. That's the grammar. The author is not a native English speaker. Naturally that will lead to mistakes. But trust me when I say that it does improve. There are still mistakes here and there (mostly pronouns), but the author is improving wonderfully. 

As for the actual story. It's a lovely story. At first the story is a little slow and some things could have definitely been done better. But as the story progresses it starts to blossom. And before you know it, you run out of chapters. 

It's clearly not the greatest thing ever. But if you are looking for a story that is fun to read, than look no further. 

It does have a slow pace to it though. Every chapter is not fill with action and s*x. It's focus more on the relationships and the changes that each character goes through. 

MC is not the center of attention. While the story does revolve around his actions. Other characters also get the spot light and we get to learn more about them and their goals. 

As for the harem... hmm... it was handle somewhat good. The author did their best to make it reasonable. It wasn't just MC going haywire. Author at least tried to make it believable and what not. At least to me it was. 

As you have noticed I have been very vague about what the story, and the characters are actually about. I just think your milage may vary and I would just like to be that voice that at least convince you to give it a try without clouding your judgement or expectations. 

Good luck and at least give it a try.

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I don't blame tons of people for dropping this novel early on. The translation in the beginning chapters are God Awful. It's obvious the author doesn't understand English that well at first. 

But it slowly gets better over time. I personally didn't really have a problem, since I've read much worse translated worms. So my brain just auto translates what it's trying to get across, but I've began to notice less and less people complaining about the translations. Which is mostly why I decided to keep up with this novel.

Now another thing I like is the main focus. This is not an action heavy story. It's mostly focused on the interactions between the characters and the world. Which, compared to the near infinite amount of action focused harem stories like thus, is a nice breath of fresh air.

My final (and favorite) aspect. Is the harem itself. The author very early on states (in universe) that the harem will be at max 5. Now while this does heavily restrict the author, as if he just said "it will be small" it could technically be any number. But In my opinion, I enjoy this aspect. It does limit the harem, but it also allows for deeper character interactions as the author can focus on only a select few characters to develop their romantic relationship with the MC

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