[Do not translate my work you rulate site bastards.]
##Book 2: My Harem in Multiverse: BEYOND >Released##
My life changed for better or for worse after Harley injected me with an experimental drug that transformed my body into a hunk. And I have awakened a freaking Eroge System.
Time to make money and create a harem of my own. But, only if it was that easy. My life was filled with beautiful girls, sex and shit tons of problems...
Hidden family secrets, Vampires, League of Assassins, Anti-Mutant organization, My freaking unstable power, The one who laughs...
Oh, and not to forget fucking Deadites...
...and many more...
This is the story of my daily life... And since you will be seeing daily life incidents, no one knows what's going to happen next. Unexpected incidents, random events, and characters popping up like those vampires...
If you are not into smut and somewhat a bit slow story, pass along. Don't read. I am getting enough complaints from casual readers who want to know everything in a single chapter. But, if you have patience, read the first vol and then decide... As for blue balling, read vol-2 and decide for yourself. Lacking action? Read vol-3 and decide.
[NO MINDLESS ORGY OR FUCK DOLLS] [NO NTR] [IN*ST> Yes]
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I am not sure what is up with the other two glowing reviews for this novel, MY HAREM IN DC & MARVEL MULTIVERSE is a pretty bad novel. Bad as in terrible writing, logical inconsistencies, and poor pacing. The character interactions make very little sense in the context the author provided. The MC comes off as frantic and disjointed which I think is a problem with the writing itself and not the character as it was supposed to be portrayed. With very little context or clues the MC makes insane assumptions that turn out to be true and the story just kind of powers through leaving me baffled how they got from point A to B in the story.
I don't enjoy sh*tting on an author's very first work but just because it's good for a first try doesn't make it good or a particularly enjoyable read either. This story is a very amateur attempt at a Marvel/DC nerd's wish-fulfillment fantasy that is poorly executed and paced. From the other reviews, it might get better later on but I'm not interested in slogging through 50-100 chapters just to get to the good stuff.
Edit: Apparently the author didn't appreciate my review of his novel and sent me a nonsensical and vaguely insulting message...
EDIT Again: Wow this Author is a nutjob, he's convinced there is some kind of Webnovel conspiracy out to get him and according to his spamming on my profile page here, I am also a part of it. He is clearly drinking his own Kool-Aid with this. Also you, The author, reviewed this story with your own alt account just to discredit mine. I'm not that lazy where I won't check the @Drifter1 account history on here. this account is a half a year old, with only two reviews coincidentally posted on the same day and it's only reading history are all your own novels. Your a desperate lunatic.
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Its just not logical at any level. I got to ch16 before I was done. I don't mind slow burns, I mean I love the wheel of time and that's about as slow burn as it gets. We're talking a full page just to describe a sunset. So ya, I don't know wher these positive reviews are coming from. But for me this is a truly half baked story...
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Very bold and interesting Fanficion, I already thought that from the title, as both Marvel and Dc are massive settings, that he might have bitten off more than one person could handle. But then he added Ash and co from the Evil Dead Series, & I had to say to myself that I thought he might have added too much. And yet somehow he makes it not only work but also makes it pretty good.
Keep up the good work!
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An interesting and bold fanfiction showing the different colors of the worlds of Marvel and DC with an actual storyline. A really good story for dedicated readers.
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Loving the story so far.
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