Luckily, I think 90% of my fic's readers understand the facts and clues I have dropped about MC because they think and grasp the situation. Like his power of Void [Marvel] and Weapon Master[DC]. A true comic reader knows about the fact behind the powers. And 10% as you know... I will explain things to them.

Like every fanfiction, some dumb readers are spamming toxic comments and some casual readers are commenting without trying to understand and want me to tell them everything in a single chapter. For example: Madame Clara's situation. Some are asking why Fury give MC the club even when he knew about the druggie. Well, I have posted Author's Note in the end, read that. Then another asks if he is Immortal, why is he acting like a moron in the chapter where MC slaps Karl's head. I have posted the reason in a comment for those who are too dumb to understand the situation. No disrespect by the way because I got some really dumb questions lately.

This is the problem with a first-person POV fic. I can tell readers what the MC knows and what he thinks about the things or people around him. I can't give you info that MC doesn't have access to. That's the rule of first-person POV. That's why you have to wait for MC to discover things for himself. I will post an Extra chapter every 10 chapters to solve the problems.

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Extras-6 Alana and Alica [Final Extras]May 4, 2024
Extras-5 Two milf dominatrixMay 4, 2024
Extras-4 Selina- Bad KittyMay 4, 2024
Extras-3: Storm- BDSMMay 3, 2024
Extras-2: Missing chapter of Cafe MilfMay 3, 2024
Extras-1: Karina’s Missing ChapterMay 3, 2024
UpdateSep 3, 2023
Ch: 200 [Wedding] [Completed]Aug 16, 2023
Ch: 199 [Friends]Aug 16, 2023
Ch: 198 [Preparations]Aug 16, 2023
Ch: 197 [Pregnant!]Aug 16, 2023
CH: 195, 196 [Alex & Emma]Aug 16, 2023
Ch: 194 [Everyone knows!?]Aug 16, 2023
Ch: 193 [Date’s End]Aug 16, 2023
Ch: 192 [Dress up Pleasure]Aug 16, 2023

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mattzem

Status: c7

Jun 24, 2023

I am not sure what is up with the other two glowing reviews for this novel, MY HAREM IN DC & MARVEL MULTIVERSE is a pretty bad novel. Bad as in terrible writing, logical inconsistencies, and poor pacing. The character interactions make very little sense in the context the author provided. The MC comes off as frantic and disjointed which I think is a problem with the writing itself and not the character as it was supposed to be portrayed. With very little context or clues the MC makes insane assumptions that turn out to be true and the story just kind of powers through leaving me baffled how they got from point A to B in the story.

I don't enjoy sh*tting on an author's very first work but just because it's good for a first try doesn't make it good or a particularly enjoyable read either. This story is a very amateur attempt at a Marvel/DC nerd's wish-fulfillment fantasy that is poorly executed and paced. From the other reviews, it might get better later on but I'm not interested in slogging through 50-100 chapters just to get to the good stuff.

Edit: Apparently the author didn't appreciate my review of his novel and sent me a nonsensical and vaguely insulting message...

EDIT Again: Wow this Author is a nutjob, he's convinced there is some kind of Webnovel conspiracy out to get him and according to his spamming on my profile page here, I am also a part of it. He is clearly drinking his own Kool-Aid with this. Also you, The author, reviewed this story with your own alt account just to discredit mine. I'm not that lazy where I won't check the @Drifter1 account history on here. this account is a half a year old, with only two reviews coincidentally posted on the same day and it's only reading history are all your own novels. Your a desperate lunatic.

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DLRhanna

Status: ch: 125 [captives]

Jul 4, 2023

Very bold and interesting Fanficion, I already thought that from the title, as both Marvel and Dc are massive settings, that he might have bitten off more than one person could handle. But then he added Ash and co from the Evil Dead Series, & I had to say to myself that I thought he might have added too much. And yet somehow he makes it not only work but also makes it pretty good.

Keep up the good work!

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Vanzl

Status: ch: 1 [interruption]

Jul 4, 2023

Its just not logical at any level. I got to ch16 before I was done. I don't mind slow burns, I mean I love the wheel of time and that's about as slow burn as it gets. We're talking a full page just to describe a sunset. So ya, I don't know wher these positive reviews are coming from. But for me this is a truly half baked story...

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God_of_Doom

Status: ch: 156 [under the moonlight]

Jul 12, 2023

An interesting and bold fanfiction showing the different colors of the worlds of Marvel and DC with an actual storyline. A really good story for dedicated readers.

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