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(WARNING! - The Author is not responsible for any actions, words, memetic hazards used by, or impressionable youths corrupted by, the MC.)
Meet ALPHA-555-12-4412; an unstable, unpredictable, and possibly insane Sapient AI of dubious morals with a love for everything that goes "Boom!".
All qualities that make him perfect as the "Spearhead" for the technologically advanced Third Galactic Federation of Sapients' and its "Galactic Unification Project". When you need a rebellion quelled, or a new species subjugated, you call in an Alpha Strike!
But when Alpha finds himself trapped in a world filled with reality-warping magics and thousand-year-old Cultivators, He quickly learns he might be out of his depths for once.
And like any good fish out of water, he adapts the best he knows how; by giving the fish a pair of sick robot legs and equipping it with a battleship-rated intercontinental Railgun!
Soon all the Worlds of the Grand Firmament will learn; He's not trapped inside with them; they're trapped in here with Him.
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Reader's Warning! - Side-effects of this story may include, but are not limited to, [Insomnia], [PTSD], [Anasaphilia], [Cachinnation induced asphyxiation], [Paranoia that you're being constantly watched by an Omnipresent interstellar intelligence of dubious origins] (you are), and [Totally rational, AI-centric, Technophobia].
By reading the first word of this Synopsis, you have given your legally binding agreement to absolve the Third Galactic Federation of Sapients and all associated parties from any and all damages caused as a result of this story in the past, present, future, and outside of time or causal reality.
[Non-Causal Reality damages may be eligible for review.]
[For details, see section - ̴̠̑̀͋̕.̵̲͚͉͓̐̔͐γ̴͙̙͓̺̿͌̚b̷͎̌̏̆̕ǫ̴̛̬̞͍͚̑̍d̵̮̭̭́̈́̋ ̵̘̣̗͙͝ɿ̸̡̦͚̜͊̈́̋̕ὐ̷̛͎̺̰̯̟̈́ö̵̤͚́͑̽γ̵̧̝͐̈ ̸͙͍͚͛͌͝b̴̮̽n̷̨̏̄̂͘͝i̵͍̙͒̓ʇ̴̠̅̚ ̵̛̗̩̝̘̅̇̏͝ͅɿ̸̥̼̞̈́͊̇͒͠ɘ̷̧̨͂̆̉v̶̖̭̈ɘ̸͖̾͂ń̷̥̟͝ ̵͇̱̊́͠l̴͖̾̈͑͒̒l̴̲̦̮̂̈́͗̎͝ͅ'̴̛̱̍͑͘γ̴̥̝̼̞̈́͐̆͠ɘ̶̥̈̑̆̕ʜ̷̰̒̐͝T̵̼̐ ̵̹͐.̶̹͓̆̎ϱ̷̧̤̀̚n̵͔̼͋į̴̟̥͍͂͜b̸̛̩̲̥̭̪̍͌b̴̥͙̈̎̐́̚i̵̛̲͎͔͋͊ʞ̵̛̩̞̜̥̀́͘͜ ̷̛͉̓Ɉ̵̰̞̉̀̂ƨ̶̧̰͖̈υ̸̧͕͚͝Ⴑ̸̭̄̂ ]
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I was hesitant to give this harsh review, but as I read along I realised can't stay without saying my opinion. While it's commendable that author came back with intent on writing this story better than his previous one. I can confidently say that previous version of story was for more enjoyable... there I said it.
First of all previous story had more excitement and gave little rewards we reader enjoyed. Inspite of all the grammar mistakes, plot holes that story was fun to read, I was always excited to read a new chapter. But this story despite having sharp plotline and polished grammar, I can't enjoy it. It feels like I'm reading watered down version of previous story, but with added glitter and shiny of mysterious characters and characters to supplement it. Personally I disliked many choices that author took, while we were expecting comedy undertone like the previous work, and almost got baited into thinking that it was comedic story in early chapters, we are suddenly slapped by tragedy and drama that I didn't relate. Not only author toned down alpha's compulsive meme behaviour, he repeated same scenarios with at least three pov, no thank you while some people like 30 pov of same scenario I get bored of it quickly. My main grip isn't even that story took different turn than I expected but, it wasn't fun, I don't read on web to expect genius level of plot and character writing, to me reading has always been being enjoyable or not, it doesn't matter how stupid the plot is, other thing felt extra and glittery, they look pretty sure, but nothing else in substance. In the end It feels like I'm reading something average 3.5 rated version of 4.5 star work. I know I have no right to judge your work, but I at least wanted to get it off my chest, good luck author I hope you can write more stores in future.
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There are 2 books here, one about a world conquering weapons platform housing a slightly unhinged AI stranded in a cultivation world and one about the denizens of a cookie cutter cultivation world. Now usually that would not be a problem with this type of story. You can see how the world reacts to the aforementioned AI and the insuring hijinks. But the story puts too much focus on the cookie cutter world without making the reader care about any of it. This book feels like the 1000+ chapters of a cultivation novel, but in those novels you had 1000+ chapters to start caring about the denizen side characters.
The chapters that this book has which actually feature Alpha are 5/5 but are overshadowed by the more numerous filler side-stories of random side-characters which are 3/5 at best. One of the books here is stellar and one is filler fluff. I hope to see the book realize it's potential and turn to a full 5/5 in the future.
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Great story with amusing comedic elements along with some touching moments. Extremely well written!
Snarky AI for the win!
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