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Author got potential so far checks of everything good with a fanfic. Grammar 5/5 dialogue 4.5/5 can be improved but it still very good. Battle scenes are also very well done 5/5. Only critique is how the romance can be developed and the start is a bit rough like every transmigration story. TLDR Author has a lot of potential very very close to the top tier fanfics.
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I'm definitely intrigued thus far. I've always been a fan of the Arifureta series and I want to see where this goes. I'm looking forward to seeing how/if a relationship between Reiji and Hajime develops!
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